Never My Intention to Brag - Comments

Cool story, I like it:) I feel like you could tone down on the vulgar language just a little bit. You also might want to watch your grammar and punctuation. But other than that, I love this story! It's so good and I hope you post more of it soon!!!

Cool story, I like it :)

After reading the first chapter I've established that you may have an interesting idea behind the plot of the story and I like that.

But what I would like to do is give you a few things that you could perhaps correct which will make your writing look even better, if you don't mind. They are only minor errors but once corrected, your writing will look that much better :)

When using dialogue instead of using singular apostrophes - ' - use quotation marks > " ". Try not to use too much vulgar language outside of dialogue as if not used in proper context, it can put the reader off. "I let him copying as I'm such a good best friend.. should be "I let him copy". "He's skunk hair" should be "His skunk hair". Also remember to use appropriate punctuation with the dialogue. For example:- "you done." should be "You done?". Also, I've noticed a lack of capitalisation on words at the beginning of a sentence - always remember these as your story will get reported for grammar errors.

I don't want to sound like I'm taking a dig at your work because I'm absolutely not - I just want to help you to improve your writing so more people will want to read. I hope some of my points helped a little and good luck for the progression of this piece! :]

I'm not a fan of reading ATL Fics but Comment swap brought me here, so I shall read it :) I read the first couple paragraphs of the first chapter and so far its adorable and I love the characters. I'm not sure who's who but I will figure it out as I read I'm sure :)

This is really cute and seems like a great idea, and I love ATL and you used the guy's playful attitudes to make this really fun. I find it kinda annoying to read, though, as there are so many grammatical errors and they're my pet hate. I'd advise you to correct them, they put people off more than you'd think. Otherwise, this would be good.

I'm not a huge fan of All Time Low, but I can enjoy their music from time to time. I like the guys' playful characters. So I was curious to read this fan fiction.

However, I must admit I did not make it past the first chapter. The story line itself sounds like it could be interesting, but the grammatical errors are just too much for me. You don't seem very sure of it, but if you plan to continue with this story, I would advice you to get a beta reader to check for grammatical errors.

While I feel like the interactions between the characters in this piece were cute and humorous, there are a ton of grammatical errors in this story. I also have to admit that, because I’m not familiar with the fandom and because you didn’t really provide much characterization, I was a little lost.