The Genius - Comments

Wow, this was written very well. I could feel the emotion of the character as she spoke of her condition. I really sympathize with her, as I would never be able to survive if I were deaf or blind, but I rely so heavily on my speech as well. This was really a good read! :D

For a prologue, it was really good. Not a lot of people can write a good prologue, especially one that captures the reader's attention, but this one does. I'm glad you can because now I want to read whatever you add to this story. I like how you somehow made me, and maybe other readers, feel your character's pain. That's also a difficult thing and not a lot of writer's can manage it.

However, in my opinion, I would just be a little careful with the separating your paragraphs. Also, I'd suggest you add a layout (much like the previous commenter said), preferably one that goes with your story. Other then that, so far, this seems like quite an interesting story and well written. I honestly can't wait to read more.

At first, I thought this was an article from the first paragraph. I was rather interested though since I could hear the pain from the second paragraph. I really like this, and it sounds really pretty. Your grammar is good too. The only thing I hope you do is add a layout. I'm rather picky on layouts, but I could understand if you don't know how to make one. It's really good though, and you should continue. :)

I can feel the girls pain here. :/ Its so sad that people get frustrated with her and I'm guessing they stop talking to her. I wonder what its like to be at school and not being able to answer anything.

The genius that is going to fix everything sounds mysterious. Hmm.. Please update soon. :)