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  • donnaslistening

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    OOO girl. These past two chapters have been amazing. And a smokeshow. You're such a great writer. I've fallen in love with this story and the characters. A book is awesome if I get emotionally attached to it. Yours is up in those ranks. You go girl! You always write amazing stuff! Very Happy
    July 15th, 2012 at 12:28am
  • Dallas.

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    Sigh. I almost feel like Benny is just too good to be true. If a man loved me right, made me breakfast in the morning and was just generally that sweet, I'd marry him...even if he was a Bruin :)
    Great chapter!
    July 14th, 2012 at 01:53pm
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    I love your story!
    July 12th, 2012 at 08:27pm
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    :3 OHMYGOSH This was perfecto. So well written. You have no idea how much I love this story. The intimate chapter was absolutely wonderful. It's so great. It could've come from a novel. Don't doubt your writing abilities, girlie! As always, it was amazing!
    July 12th, 2012 at 08:22pm
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    Hot damn. This chapter was great. The suspense is killing me. Very Happy I'm so happy for Tuukka and Mika, for Gregory, and especially for Pou and Kara. Mika is so happy. This is just written so damn well. I can't resist. I really love this story!
    July 11th, 2012 at 10:43pm
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    love them! great chapter, amazing as always!
    July 11th, 2012 at 07:15am
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    They are so perfect..I love this story!
    July 11th, 2012 at 02:14am
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    Phewww. Is it hot in here or is just me? Lots of fiery passion between them. You can just feel his sexual frustration. This chapter was great! Tuukka and Mika are so precious. :3 I just want them to talk to each in more Finnish. It's so wonderful. I can't wait for more. Very Happy
    July 11th, 2012 at 12:11am
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    this story is so good :) update soon
    July 4th, 2012 at 06:28am
  • Bekabee240

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    Update soon please!!
    July 4th, 2012 at 06:02am
  • TheAntsInvasion

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    This is getting better and better. I can't wait for more :)
    July 2nd, 2012 at 04:15am
  • donnaslistening

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    I really do love the progression of the story. It works so well. I really love this story. I can't wait for the next chapter! But keep studying. :)
    July 2nd, 2012 at 03:49am
  • Bekabee240

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    I love this, please update soon!!!
    June 30th, 2012 at 09:58pm
  • donnaslistening

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    Dammit. Why are you leaving us hanging? This is so good. I want to gobble it all up right now. The newest chapter. Smile And frustrating at the same time.
    June 27th, 2012 at 03:06am
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    Oh gosh I can't wait for the next chapter. This is such an enjoyable story, and it keeps Benny here in Boston for a while more. Smile
    June 24th, 2012 at 04:15am
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    Me likey this new chapter. It's building up so well. I love it. It took me a second to understand what a bowknot was, but I got it. I really, really enjoy this story so much. Very Happy
    June 22nd, 2012 at 02:52am
  • German13

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    I am really enjoying this story!!! I love how it doesn't go straight into a romance and you take your time to build the characters and their own story!(: I am a big hockey fan myself! My team is the Colorado Avalanches but this story is definitely keeping me entertained! I love it(: Don't stop writing!!! Very Happy
    June 20th, 2012 at 04:09am
  • Dallas.

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    They are so frustrating!!! Love the story...which is saying a lot because I'm a Philly fan. haha
    June 19th, 2012 at 02:19am
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    Ahhh! I love Chapter 10. It's so frustrating. I just want to push their faces together and make them kiss, but it's written so well. I love it.
    June 18th, 2012 at 11:18pm
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    I just started reading this and I love it! Can't wait for the next update :)
    June 18th, 2012 at 05:46am