The Gemini - Comments

I've written many a fanfiction on my phone in cars, but nothing as good as this. Agatha and Christie have a great sibling dynamic: I don't know anyone in real life who can write accurate sibling relationships. I like this!

I don't really watch Doctor who, so I was kind of wondering if I would like this or understand it. I think it's a pretty good plot! It's very easy to follow along with and for someone who's writing as the go along, it's pretty good! I like the chemistry between the two girls & how they were just kind of shrugging off the fact that he said he was "The doctor." I've never watched the show, so I don't know much about The doctors or the time travel aspect, but I think it sounds pretty interesting. Sounds like it's going to be full of adventure and cool journeys for the girls and the doctor! And i thought it was funny that the boss is gone because he won't the lottery. I wish I won the lottery LOL. Definitely recommending and subscribing :)

From comment swap.
I recently stopped watching/liking Doctor Who so it's been a while since I've read fanfiction for it of any sort, but I have to say that this was refreshing to read due to the amount of detail that you have provided. Although, honestly, the plot seemed a little worn out, but I don't blame you. It's hard to be completely original with this genre of fanfiction, and Doctor Who at that too. Although, this was refreshing to read.

@ l0lita-
Thanks haven't uploaded in a while will do that this week

I like where this is going so far. I never got into Dr. Who, mainly because I never watched the darn show. But after reading this, I may need to go check it out, to get a better grip on your story. I can't wait for the update, it's really good so far!

Subscribing & recommending. c:

Hello,
Honestly I am not a Dr. Who fan though most of my friends are. So when I read that in the description I knew that I wasn't going to be able to relate to the story as much.
However, the story seems pretty decent. I would add a few more details or a little something to pull the reader in because I didn't feel as connected to it while I was reading.

@ SirDelta
It's fanfic... But thanks for the comment it's super!

I liked the layout because it flowed well with the story. Your chapters were full of detail and description which was great because that's what I usally like. Although I felt as if this is very unoriginal. It's hard in this day to write an original story with so many other topics and storylines being writen already but it just didn't pull me in very well.

Hello dear author. Your story title is simple and I liked that. At your summary, "Agatha dated Josh at one point", this part isn't needed. Either write more about it or take that sentence off. I have heard about Doctor Who and Secrets Of The Imortal Nicholas Flamel but I have never checked them out. I liked the names you picked for the girls. C: After reading chapter one, I was glad I didn't catch any grammar/spelling mistakes. Your descriptions were simple and fit the characters of the twins you created. Keep up the greak work for you and those who love Doctor Who. ~Marian.

Hello dear author. Your story title is simple and I liked that. At your summary, "Agatha dated Josh at one point", this part isn't needed. Either write more about it or take that sentence off. I have heard about Doctor Who and Secrets Of The Imortal Nicholas Flamel but I have never checked them out. I liked the names you picked for the girls. C: After reading chapter one, I was glad I didn't catch any grammar/spelling mistakes. Your descriptions were simple and fit the characters of the twins you created. Keep up the greak work for you and those who love Doctor Who. ~Marian.

I'm from comment swap. I love doctor who so this story is right up my street. I like how you used short chapters too. The plot is good and I love the doctor :) There were a few minor grammatical issues, but I'm not one to talk. I agree with the other commenter's about the layout hurting your eyes a little but I can see why you used it as the blue's tardis blue exactly. Overall, awesome read and keep updating :)

Comment Swap Sent Me.
I really like the story. I'm a little bit of a Doctor Who nerd myself, so I really enjoyed this. I'm actually a fan of short chapters, so I liked the read.
Oh, and this "Take out your stopwatches to record the longest, most awkward silence ever" is actually really clever. I really am in love with that line. It's original and super cute. Overall, amazing fic :)

@ Livelaughlove1221
THANKS A TON!

Comment swap brought me here:

The summary really pulled me into your story, and I really loved the layout because it flowed well with the story. Your chapters were full of detail and description which was great and it kept me interested. This is an awesome idea for a story and I would love to read more about it :) Keep on writing, you’re good at it.

This is great i really like it

I have only heard of Dr. Who and have never really gotten the chance to learn more about it. That being said, I still found this extremely interested. I like the twins a lot and admire them as characters. Your writing is fairly fluent and allows the story to flow well! (aside from a few minor errors). This definitely peaked my interest, so job well done! (:

Okay, confession. I've never watched Dr. Who and I never really cared to BUT this was a really great story. I wasn't lost in it like I thought I was gonna be even though I'd never seen it. The layout made it a bit hard to read but I really enjoyed this story :D

Wow wow wow wow wow (: I really, really like this... Like, super like it. I think I am in love with Dr. Who after reading this. I guess I agree with all other commentors about the layout, but it's really nothing you can't fix. Your naturalism in writing can make most readers lure themselves into the reading, and you're pretty descriptive (just make sure to be careful about punctuation and grammatical errors). It went a bit fast, but other than that, really good!! Good job (:

I am absolutely in love with Dr. Who. I think you are doing a great job. I am pretty bad at keeping up with the whole supernatural events, but they really interest me. Maybe you can explain some of it it a bit more in depth. I can't wait to see where this story is heading towards. I seriously think I should read The Nicholas Flemmel books now. Update soon please?

I'm torn. I love Doctor Who, but I'm not a fan (at all) of Nicholas Flamel.

Your writing style is nice, but I agree with DreamerHarlotSinner in that I wish you had been a bit more descriptive.

The only 'bad' things for me are the few minor grammatical mistakes (mostly usage and punctuation) and THE LAYOUT. It burnt my eyes; I had to switch to default. The blue, as Tardis-y it may be, is too bright for my eyes.

I did enjoy it, though, and I hope you continue! <3