Comment swap brought me here, but holy hell, this is some great writing! I didn't spot any mistakes while reading, and your dialogue to description ratio was really good; it wasn't mostly speech or description. One thing I would say was, maybe in my own ignorance I didn't realise it was a Supernatural fan fiction before I started reading and so I was confused as to their job. But when I realised, it made so much more sense! In saying that, before I realised, you did a great job in characterization especially seeing as though I haven't watched an episode of SPN in my life. I really enjoyed it, and I thought it was great. I'm glad I read it. :-) xox
October 5th, 2012 at 05:28pm