"...you better remove your hand from my girl..." Totally made me melt inside =) And i bet Jo's face was priceless at that statement! I wonder what'll happen back in the motel room...
I can only imagine what's gonna happen next. Well if I were Kate I'd probably try and get mad at Dean for 'rescueing' me and complain that I had everything 'handled'. lol. I don't think Jo and her are going to be friends any time soon. Maybe far far down the line, but not now. Awesome chapter! I can't wait for more!
Damn... Must be a good punch and his girl? Hehe. Sucks about her father. Hmm... Maybe her and Jo will end up friends anyways.. Idk. My thoughts are all over the place, another good chapter.
This is awesome! I love the jealous Dean!! I want more of him! ;) I know it hasn't been that long since you updated, but I'm hooked! Even a day feels like forever! Please, please, please update soon! :D
Just found this and so far I really like it. I like the writing style of it, the layout - even if it bothered me in the beginning xD - the charaters, how they are built up so far and how they interact with one another. I haven't really read much supernatural fanfiction yet, but so far I think this is in the categorie of the better ones. I wonder how your take on all of this will be, how these turn of events will change things, if they will go after the demon and I have a feeling that their father sold his soul for Dean's health or something. If Dean will blame her or Sam.. or simply take it out on them.. if that happens at all.. So, good story so far, I'm subscrbing and I'm looking forward to even more of this - hopefully soon.
oh no. That can't be good. I wonder if this only gonna make Dean hate her more even though it's not her fault at all? Maybe he'll take is pain and anger out on her?
Dang, that was some fast wranglin there pardna! Seriously though, i like where this story is going. It could use a bit more detail, maybe enough that you could spread one case over 2 chapters or something, but i like it so far! =)