Guns & Roses - Comments

makes them* experience all the emotions.

Woooow, that was a trip and a half. You write so well, it really draws the reader in and experience all the emotions. I almost teared up at the end there. But at least Dean and Kate know how they feel about each other now. I wonder what they're going to do with that information...

YAAAAY:) Haha all the original stuff was great:) Update sooooon!!

Wonderful! Please update soon! :)

I really liked this chapter. All girls! =) But the Marisa character doesn't have much compassion, why did you make her out to be more like Dean?

So maybe this will get Dean to wake up a bit? Or maybe a slap is the way to go. I wonder If she really can block this from herself or if another break down is coming up. Hmmm.. Maybe some dean man up action too.. Hmm.. Good chapter.

I love this story so much :) Hahah the only thing that has been bothering me though is like, basically most of the lines of dialogue are taken straight from the episode, which I think would be okay with Sam and Dean, but even with Kate, half the time she takes one of Sam or Dean's lines, you know? I'd like to see original stuff with her I guess! Especially in this last chapter where Dean and Sam weren't in it much, and Marisa and Kate just took their lines from the episode! I, personally, would like to see their own character and stuff come through and their own witty or funn or emotional lines! Haha just a thought, this wasn't meant to be a harsh criticism, it's just been bothering me for a while! Haha I love this tory though haha it is the only supernatural story that I have kept up with:)

You would draw on Marisa while she slept...... Bahahahaha

I don't think I espected that exactly.. Wow.. Killing, nearly killing, shooting, demons... This chapter has everything doesn't it. Even a little romance. Plus dean ignored Jo ^.^ at least they have those necklaces now, I hope those work for all of the demons coming at them.. Or at leastosf of them.. Hmm.. Marissa/Sam & Kate/Dean ftw! Good chapter.

I love Marisa! Sammy's finally going to get a love interest! :) This is another awesome chapter! :) Please update again soon!
PS: Thank you for updating so quickly!! :)

I think this is one of my favorite chapters!!! I somewhat still expect Kate to leave or at least try to leave for another 'break', because if I were her, I wouldn't sure as hell not forgive those two that easily, and actually I might throw something at them first. As for Marisa, she's awesome. :) I think that's exactly what Kate needs, and Sam sure as hell needs some lovin. I just wanted to say that a good direction you can think about going for this story is having Dean and Kate know they like each other but have it be a constant battle between them as if Kates wants to make it official but Dean refuses because whenever the Winchesters get close to people they end up getting killed. And no offense to the Marisa character cause I love her but that actually might be good if she dates Sam and they fall madly in love, but then she gets killed off somehow, and that would add to the stress of Dean and Kate and how they want to be together but they shouldn't. Just an idea. :)

Hehehe i'm a "cool character"!

Hehehe i'm a "cool character"!

Ha. Waitress. Funny. But my character is badass! There's no other word to explain it. And i'm having serious separation anxiety bffl =(

Very interesting indeed.. I wonder how things will go from here.. And if she heard him or not. Hmm... And another female hunter? Could be cool. She seems like a cool character, so why not? Can't wait for more :3

I was sent here via comment swap.

Firstly, the layout is gorgeous! Simple, but I really think it works well. I haven't the slightest clue about Supernatural, so I'll be reading this as an original fiction almost. I actually had to google whether it was supernatural, so that shows you how clueless I really am, haha!

I love how we instantly get into the action in the first paragraph. Actually, I just love the first paragraph. It's an excellent beginning, gets you hooked right in, and the rest of your chapter does the same. Your descriptions are scarce, but I think it works well in the first chapter, leading to a sense of mystery. Why are they fighting demons, and who are they? Makes me want to read on. The only issue I have with the first chapter is the fact that you've put a link to Polyvore in there. Technically speaking, it's totally against Mibba rules to put links in the middle of stores, you're supposed to leave those for the authors notes. It would be a shame for such a good story to be reported for such a minor rule-breakage.

Chapter two keeps up the mystery, and I really do love this. Demons and mystery work well together as a story plot. “That’s the thing about life, sweetheart, it doesn’t have a happy ending.” is quite possibly my favourite line EVER. So true, and it fits really well with the concept of this story. I also really like how you have them joking around when they're doing something serious. That just shows that they must have been doing what they're doing for a while. I also like how you have Kate rebelling for a small while, before returning. It makes them seem more like real characters with conflicts, rather than just words on a page.

All in all, I think you've got a really good story going on here, and I think I'll subscribe (even though I know nothing about the show, haha!). Good work, well done! :)

I look forward to your updates so much! I love it love it love it!

It's two in the morning so pardon the following sentence fragments. Read whole thing just tonight. Love Supernatural like chocolate. Dean's a total babe. Update soon. Totes addicted to your story and will be checking my e-mail religiously for updates...I think that's everything.

I'm from comment swap! I've never watched or even heard of Supernatural, but it seems pretty interesting. I might actually check it out after reading this! Your style of writing is cool, and you have good grammar, which is always nice. Keep writing! Awesome job.

I am very thankful =P Ack FINALLY some Dean and Kate action. It's about time ;)