San Diego Warriors - Comments

So hey. I came across this and I read the whole thing right away. I reallllllllly love this story. It's just an extra plus that you update so often. I can't wait to read more. I saw your author's note about a possible sequel.....Maybe you could do something with Sam and Haley so it's not too far from your original? I also like the idea from the comment below, about a younger bad boy type player. Just a thought....Update soon :)

Oh All-star weekend...sigh...where fantasies come to life..all that talent in one spot...lol. Sorry, I will snap out of it...great updates! More tests for Kaite..I have a feeling that she will pass with flying colours:) I wonder if her ovaries will be able to hold out much longer with all the children and John interaction going on...lol. Cant wait for more. As for a sequel, im all for someone younger, maybe a player that is a little bit rougher around the edges. Im all for the bad boy types...could be interesting! Just a suggestion:)

loved the update and i can't wait for more! i absolutely loveee this story! i think a sequel would be amazing and i think it would be a good idea to have it focused on sam :) just my personal opinion though, but im sure whatever you decide will be good either way :)

Before I start gushing about how much I adore this story, I must tell you that I love that you update so frequently and are so dedicated to it. I've never made it passed five or six chapters. You have no idea how wonderful it is to log on every evening and find out you've posted another chapter or two.

Now that that's done with, OH MY GOD THIS IS ABSOLUTELY FABULOUS. I envy their relationship so much, yet I'm endlessly grateful they're together and happy. I love how blunt John was when Suzy was grilling him about Katie. Showed that woman up. ;) I don't care if this story lasts 1000 chapters--I'll be waiting in anticipation for a sequel, and then more after that! Thank you so much for this story!

This story is amazing! They way you write it is perfect! I've been reading some really bad stories lately especially with spelling and it got me really discouraged about this site. This story is super neat and I love how you made up your own hockey player! Keep it up!

can't wait for the next update :)

oooh the parents...lol. Great update. I find these two so cute. Loved the caveman part with her in his shirt and just generally your writing..I'm a fan! keep it up:) Can't wait for more!

Omg do u know a real haley richardson?? ch. 3

WORDS CAN"T EVEN DESCRIBE HOW MUCH I"M IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY .___.

aww, this was great! I cant wait for more! and yay they finally got it on...lol....cant wait for more. they are so cute!

I am in love with this story! I get so excited when I see an update! I love the baby name you chose! My favorite girl name right now! I can't wait to see where there relationship goes! I love you's? :)

Love this story!! Can't wait for the next update :)

Love this story!! Can't wait for the next update :)

i really love this story! i i kinda read all of it just now :) haha its super awesome keep it up! also like that you update frequently!

Loved it! I love how sweet he is and I'm so glad she finally stopped fighting her feelings and is just going with it now. looking forward to more updates:) I love your writing!

Katie's so lucky she's got a family guy. These past few chapters made me feel so warm and nostalgic--I loved that they finally got together over the holidays. For whatever reason, it's so much more romantic and charming. And John is such a sweetheart. I'm actually so scared he's going to turn out to be a raging sociopath, since he's such a god now. ;)

DO IT KATIE--he's a keeper!

3 freaking years, I'm not sure a common man could go three years. I want more so bad because I have silently become a fan of Katie and what she stands for and how she still wants her beliefs to be right and not change. but she's finding that he's not going to hurt her even though she keeps waking up all alone. I hope she realizes he chose her, not some blonde bimbo. Great work though.
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3 YEARS!!! wow...lol. I know I wanted more...this was incredibly sweet though, so I'm cool with it:P Can't wait to hear about his past, must have been a doozy for him to go that long, her too! I'm glad it is progressing for them though and can't wait to read more. Keep up the amazing work :)

I. Am. In love. With this.
Literally just might be my favorit on Mibba, not joking. I love your style of writing and the fact that the characters are real, not over-dramatic. I also like how they began to know eachother over time before they hopped into a relationship. Keep it up and please update soon! :)

Whew-whew, gotta love a man who isn't shy to show affection! I love these two and this story! Can't wait for more:)