Instinct - Comments

In here from the comment swap feature. I’m glad I used it because otherwise I don’t know if I would have seen your story.

I must say you have quite the knack for world building. There are layers of detail to the background in your story and I find that rare in stories. I also think you richly described the events in the first couple chapters! Great job.

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Just by taking one look at the layout did I notice how beautiful it made the story seem. It fit this whole story more than I could imagine and honestly, it's just eye-candy for me right now. Your writing is very unique, I have never seen someone right so flawlessly like you have and I have enjoyed this with more than I thought I would. Great job.

Hello fellow comment swapper.
I think that your summary could have been more of a hook.The first thing that I thought was, Dogs I HATE dogs. I really am not one for reading these types of stories. I was surprised to find that I actually did enjoy this. You did a great job of making the story as suspenseful as possible. This was quite an interesting read and you should continue writing.

I found this through comment swap and here's my comment:

I'm going to start with what AmberlyBell did, I AM IN FREAKING LOVE with your layout. I literally got to your story and was like "Oh my god, I freakin' love this layout." Anyways, to the good stuff. Your writing is amazing, and you have a technique that pulls me in that I'm completely enthralled by what you've written. So enthralled I didn't even hesitate to subscribe and recc your story. You're a brilliant writer and I can't wait to read more.

Question:
What genre is this story going to be? Action/Adventure? Romance Adventure? I'm curious because I'm typically a romance reader and want to know if I'll be going off the beaten path of my usual reading.

1) what time period eactly is this?
2) is this in a alterna-world or "apart of our own worlds history"?
It feels like this entire chapter your telling a story. Which I know you are but it should be more like she's reliving a memory not reading black-and-white. It needs more...life in it? This is Annie reliving a memory of some importance to her so it should be how she saw it through her eyes. Not the author telling what happened.
But the ending with Annie and her father made me laugh.

This has to be one of the most AMAZING layouts I have seen. Do you do this yourself? The spacing and everything in your story is a relief to some stories I have read along with your grammar and technique. The story follows a well developed plot and I find the suspense very addicting. I love this, all of it :)

comment swap brought me here and i'm glad it did i love this! the layout is beautiful. and the story itself? it is brilliant. i love the curse and i love the originality. this is extremely well-written and grammatically correct. its wonderful.

i love this! the layout is beautiful. and the story itself? it is brilliant. i love the curse and i love the originality. this is extremely well-written and grammatically correct. its wonderful.

I really like this story so far! It's very interesting. Usually I don't do like vampires and werewolves and stuff, mostly because they seem too hand in hand with Twilight. But I like that this is a curse! It has me curious. And even more curious to find out what happens when the story actually begins! You've definitely wanted more!
There was like one spelling mistake, no big deal. haha just thought you would want to know! I know I'll reread my stories and come across one little thing and all I can think is NOOOOO!
Anyways, keep up the good work, can't wait to see where you take this!

Firstly I'd like to begin by telling you that your layout is beautiful and nicely done. The colors match nicely, and they aren't too bright or too dull. The only minor complaint I have is the font size. I feel it is a tad bit small.
Continuing on to the content of your story I would like to commend you on such a creative idea. This strays from the norm and I adore this idea. It's horrific yet not over done; it's close to perfection. I love the tale you came up with about the wolves attacking the village, and the plot behind it. You write very descriptively, and every thing flows together with ease. Nicely done.

I really really like your background. It's beautiful! I love your style of writing, it's so sleek. I like reading real novels by people that write with the same talent that you have. I love the idea that could be behind the story. I feel like it could be great! Keep writing.

This work is amazing. I couldn't stop reading all the way through. The idea is unique and the layout is wonderful. You have a nice choice of words and set the plot up perfectly. A very well done piece of art.

This story is simply fan-ta-dab-ulos! I adore the way you wrote it, I felt as if I was reading a proper published book. Please write more.