Simply beautiful. I fall in love with this story even more everytime you update. Two questions: One: did Jacob imprint on Evelyn? And if the answer is yes Two: How will that affect Jacob and Nessie later in? Update soon?
You have excellent taste in music. Radioactive is one of my favorites and I freaked out a little when I saw you used it c; This story is so amazingly great and I just want to love you. Let me love you.
*3 minutes later* I lied again. I have another question. Are they ever going to find Margaret? I love Evelyn and her story but I want to know what happened to Margaret because I don't want anything bad to happen to Evelyn's best friend.
Loved the chapter. Poor Evelyn fell from a tree. But at least she finally did something without someone breathing down her neck trying to watch out for her.
I wonder how Edward is going to react. Two questions: One, why did Jacob mumble that Bella was going to kill him when Evelyn was climbing the tree? And two, and I know I have asked this before, but why is Edward more protective with Evelyn not being around the wolves than he is with Bella? It just doesn't make sense to me.
But anyway I really like the update and can't wait for the next one.
So this seems pretty interesting. I think I tried reading this once before where I couldn't. Hmm.. On well.. Important thing is i read it now and I'm a little hooked.. So subscribing! And looking forward to more.
Gosh you are devious. You imply a slight Evelyn Jacob moment and then just shoot it down. Be still my beating heart lol. I kind of have an idea. What if you had Jacob start to fall for her just a little bit. In the normal way, no weird imprinting or anything, but he has no idea what it means. Because of course all he's heard since he became a,werewolf is imprinting this and legend that. It would be a foreign concept to him pretty much. And Evelyn wouldn't get it either because she knows that he is suposed to imprint on renesmee. All I can say is that reading these last few chapters I've had Almost Lover by A Fine Frenzy stuck in my head. Basically I would love you forever if they fell in love or started to have feelings for each other and then by some strange turn of events she gets sent home or something... Bittersweet fangirly moment lol.
Well anyway, I've never been much of a twilight fan but I,love the type of stories where people get stuck into alternate universes with people from books and stuff and I have to say I love this one. I actually enjoy Evelyn's story a whole lot more than twilight but I also realize this story couldn't have been possible without stephanie meyer in the wings.
So, kudos to you as I bring this extremely long comment to an end :)
Just dropping off another comment. I am now begging for more chapters to be put up. :X This was an awesome chapter. It's too bad that Jake already has a set imprint and he can't imprint on Ev. I wonder if he could overcome the imprinting process and make himself imprint on Ev... Hmmmm ~shifty evil eyes~ Bahaha. Anyways, I love it. Good Job and Good Luck. C:
I'm on chapter 13. Or at the end of it. I'm kind of annoyed that I still don't know who she fancies most. Q.Q I wish I had a big brother like Emmett, He's amazing. Lol. I was really surprised when Edward flipped shit on Ev. x.x I freaking love this story. First chapter and I was like , "Dammit, I'm hooked on Twilight stories again." It's a good thing, Of course!!! I love this story (like the hundredth time) and I can't wait till I get to the rest of the already written chapters and beg for more! xD Keep updating, I'm really glad I found this story.