Night Call - Comments

Oh my gosh. She got Jake really mad. But she had right enough to. Now I wonder what Emmett will do.
Actually I have no questions for this chapter. Everything fell into place perfectly.

Please Update.

And, aha..the note Emmett left!

I'm so sorry for missing out on commenting on these last two or so updates! :(
But I'm commenting now ;)
So, I have a question: Is there going to be any romance between Evelyn and the characters or did you have something else planned for it?
Well, two: How are things going to go down with the pack if they know nothing about what she knows? Are they going to find out soon? And does Bella know everything the Cullens know?
Okay, well, you know. Lol. I seriously love seeing you've updated! Stephanie Meyer should look at this ;)
I hope you update soon!

I can't wait for her to "unleash hell" upon them! Sounds interesting, and hell i would too after what happened!! Can't wait for an update!

Aww, Emmet's note on her cast hahah :) update soon!

I've always loved Emmet, but his signature on her cast just made me love him even more haha. Another exceptional chapter!

I'm going to be honest with you, normally when I come across a twilight fic, I avoid it like the plague. But my goodness, am I ever glad I found this one! The angle you're tackling it from is rather intriguing, and I must say I'm impressed! Good work!

Well you had me hyperventilating through this. I nearly thought that the wolves were going to kill her. And I hope Evelyn and Bella get along better. I can't wait to see what Jacob has to way to Evelyn.
And I agree with you. I would love to make chocolate milk with Emmett. I love putting a bunch of chocolate in mine.
Emmett almost broke the treaty. Oh my gosh. Well I loved the chapter.
Let's see if I can come up with a question. Ah-ha. Here we go: why does Rosaline hate Evelyn so much and how does she know that Evelyn knows something? That really confused me and I want to know why she acts that way. Does she always act hostile to every human or is there really something wrong with Evelyn to her?
And one more: why does Emmett seem to click with Evelyn so easily? He acts different around her even when Bella was being funny.
Please update soon. I really like this story.

I really like this! Very different! :) Please update soon!

And less than a minute later: please update soon.

Okay. Thank you for answering my questions. I really liked her interactions with the Cullens. I liked how when Carlisle said Alice, Evelyn immediately thought of shopping. I like her response to Emmett's question: the sky? I laughed very loud at that.
I only have one question for this one: when does she get to meet Bella? Well I lied. Here is one more: How exactly is she going to confront Jacob if he has no idea that she knows his secret?

MORE MORE MORE MORE -flails about-

I've been looking for a decent Twilight read, and it seems that I've finally found it! :)
This is very interesting, and I really enjoy this.
I wonder, though, if she'll play a big part in all of it or what?
Update soon?

I really enjoyed the update. I see what you mean about Carlisle having his way of finding out information. Now new questions: 1. Since Edward and Jasper don't say much other than what Carlisle wants to hear, what do they think of Evelyn? 2. Is evelyn going to have a huge part in what would be breaking dawn or is she just kind of there? 3. Is she going to be able to meet everyone? And 4. Does she realize that the wolf that jumped in front of her, now that she is in this world, must be Jacob?
That is it, for now. Update soon, please?

Oh update soon!! This is so good and different!!

Please keep going!

I didn't really think i was going to like the story. But i was bored and i am procrastinating so i clicked on it and started to read. I think the story line is going to be very interesting and im looking forward to reading more. :D

Even though I'm not a HUGE Twilight fanatic (though, I was fond of the books), this is excellently written and I would honestly love to read more. :D

I really like this. I am a huge twilight fan and I thought this idea was adorable. What exactly happened to Margret and does carlisle believe her story or does he suspect something else? And one more question when does this story take place exactly?
I spotted no spelling or grammer errors and the story flows very well. Please keep up the good work and I cannot wait until the next update.