Save You Tonight - Comments

Okay...When I saw this was a One Direction fan fic I was kind of put off. But.. I was oddly surprised. Regardless of the fact that this is One Dir. fan fiction, it's REALLY good writing. I was really surprised that I was actually enjoying it. Your description is amazing, and your story definitely has a little oomf to it that I was expecting. Experimented on by the Government!? I really didn't see that coming. Overall, this is really great writing. You are just an amazing author. :)

Alright, I'll admit that I was a little bummed out when I had to read your story, only because I really really don't like One Direction,but....I was pleasantly surprised. you have an impressive writing style that made your story, so far, a lot more enjoyable. You are very descriptive, which I love. It seems a lot of the time the stories I read here a lacking the description I crave. Yours was totally satisfactory. Keep up the good work!

Aye, I love the way you describe everything. The imagery, the dialogue is entertaining. And I love the way you describe the characters. If anything, I love that the most in a story- the appearance of them, the personalities they become, and the great emotion. Good job! :) P.S. I was taken by surprised at her abilities when I first read it, hah.

I would very much enjoy an update! Its just soo gooodddd!

Girl, college is not that important. Neither is sleep. This is an awesome story and I need to see more.

This story is brilliant and extremely creative too. I love it already. :)

Awesome chapter! Even though I was sad over the last cliffy, I'm glad you did that. I'm really glad that you didn't make him overreact about her powers, he actually seemed mature about it. And the last scene was HOT HOT HOT! Keep Zayn out of it!

I'm happy that Harry's okay with her being a super human, but I can't help but wonder of being so in love with Harry is going to distract her from training her powers and staying strong, update soon, loved it!

oh my god. you must update. i love this story so much! Please update?? xxx

I read the first chapter. I love Maya. She’s so strong, and she’s a refreshing female character because of her ability to handle herself so well. I like your writing style. The first person point of view you write from is very easygoing, and it really contributes to the characterization of Maya.

Comment Swap! So, I'm not the biggest One Direction fan. Not a hater, they're really funny guys, but I'm just not their biggest fan, you know? Anyway, I actually like this a lot. From the first chapter, I loved the amount of details you put in. I really felt like I was in London. And Your skill with the details just snowballed from there. This is really, really good, and I'll be keeping up with it. :)

UPDATES I LOVE UPDATES. this was cute and sad at the same time- i've had similar revelations about starting a family in the future, and being all human it's frustrating to think about. her internal struggle is ten-fold of the norm. i bet harry's gonna take it in stride, but something bad's gonna happen regardless, isn't it?

i really like this :)

Ugh, you're making me love the guys more and more. Not cool, not cool at all.

I am so so so so so SO sorry it has taken me forever to read this!! I want to comment every chapter though so it might still take me a while to catch up, but here's my thoughts on chapter one!

First of all, I absolutely LOVED the opening paragraph. The way you worded it really put a picture in my head, and it was really perfectly detailed.

Second of all, WHAT IS GOING ON. Whut. I was all "La la la, ooh she's walking around London....la la la, uh oh she's got a stalker....OH SNAP he's CIA....WAIT SHE HAS POWERS WHAT IS GOING ON"

But now that I have that out of my system, HOW FREAKING CUTE IS HARRY STYLES?? Ugh. I thought it was sweet that even though he knew he didn't stand a chance against Cameron, he still wanted to help Maya.

This story already has me really really interested!! I hope to be able to read a couple more chapters tonight after my errands. (or chapter two, in the very least)

I can't wait to see how Harry deals with this little spitfire!!

Oh my gosh I actually really like this story. Although I don't really like One Direction, I really like the way you've shown Harry's character. He's trying to help her so bad but he can't, and then the fact that she has like, super powers is so unexpected and different. It makes me wonder what they're experimenting on her for. Hmm. It's written really well and I can't wait to keep reading, I'm defiantly gonna subscribe!

Damn Harry! This story is something else, i tell you!

Avengers!!

ahh <33

OOhh, loves this its totally different from all of the other stories! Please update again soon! is she going to become like a rouge agent, and fight off any cia one's that try to keep her away from harry or she going to have to give him so they don't hurt?!

Arghhh, you're actually making me like them! Darnnnn you!