Long Live Us - Comments

Dear author, I like all those non-fictional characters (T.Mills, Breathe Carolina and All Time Low) that are mixed in this story. Thumbs up for keeping up with all those. I started listening to Breathe Carolina one week ago. lol I already subscribed because this is a really interesting and funny story, plus you have no grammar/spelling mistakes and you take your time with the descriptions which works to your advantange. Keep up the great work with this. C: ~Marian.

Dear author, I like all those non-fictional characters (T.Mills, Breathe Carolina and All Time Low) that are mixed in this story. Thumbs up for keeping up with all those. I started listening to Breathe Carolina one week ago. lol I already subscribed because this is a really interesting and funny story, plus you have no grammar/spelling mistakes and you take your time with the descriptions which works to your advantange. Keep up the great work with this. C: ~Marian.

I just found this story and I absolutely love it! Please, please, please update again soon! I'm subscribing with the hopes of a quick update because this story is too good to stop where you did. The plot is so well developed and I love Ella and Jack's relationship! It's just too adorable!

I don't really listen to any of those bands, but I really like how well the story flows and how great the grammar and spelling are. It is extremely well written. Keep writting!!!!!! Don't give up!

I LOVE T. MILLS AND BREATHE CAROLINA AND ALL TIME LOW, PRAISE ALLAH FOR THIS STORY. I seriously never read hetero stories, but this was too good to pass up. I love the fact that you use proper spelling and grammar, and that you take time with your writing. It really shows, so good job with that! Your characters are well developed. With the comment below, I agree! I love how Alex actually dyed his hair, haha. And the naked bowling hour with Jack... oh gosh. xD But yeah, I suggest you continue doing what you do! You have a really good story going on here, I love the plot. <3

Update soon, girl!

I'm here from comment swap, but I really like this story :) the writing is really well done, and the story flows. You've got yourself a subscriber :) <3

Hii~ I'm here via comment swap :3

I would just like to say, this is a very well written story you've got here~ :3
The layout is cute, pops right off the screen! The story was just, a plus haha. All Time Low~ I must say I haven't listened to them OR Breath Carolina (being that was mentioned haha) And it's making me go back to listen to them again!

Keep up the great work! :3

~NN

Wow, this is so much fun to read! I love the layout, the naming, the setting! I never ever go for ‘Warped Tour’ fictions but this was surprisingly enjoyable. You’ve got a clear writing style and this was too good to pass up on! Very good writing.

I LOVE T. MILLS AND BREATHE CAROLINA AND ALL TIME LOW, PRAISE ALLAH FOR THIS STORY. I seriously never read hetero stories, but this was too good to pass up. I love the fact that you use proper spelling and grammar, and that you take time with your writing. It really shows, so good job with that! Your characters are well developed. With the comment below, I agree! I love how Alex actually dyed his hair, haha. And the naked bowling hour with Jack... oh gosh. xD But yeah, I suggest you continue doing what you do! You have a really good story going on here, I love the plot. <3

Update soon, girl!

Hey I'm here thanks to comment swap. I LOVE All time low so when I saw this was a All time low fan fix I was erratic. I don't really read Jack fan fix because I can never take them seriously because... Well you know Jack, but I really like this one.

You grammar is also really good, I'm not the best when it comes to grammar but I still know when something is very well written.

I found it funny about how Alex has died his hair pink, I couldn't stop laughing.

If you have time you should check out my story's and even some of Darkbunny96's. We even have to story's together, ones called The swarm, it's about the world getting taken over by zombies and me and my friend Darkbunny96 saving You me at six. And the other is about me and my friend again Darkbunny96 swapping body's with M shadows and Zacky vengeance from Avenged sevenfold... I'm kinda a metal head.

Any way loved the story and can't wait for an update

I like this, it's quite well written. I will mention that I do kind of feel like I've missed a big part of the story. It might just be because it's still just the beginning so you haven't had much time to explain the characters, etc. I like the story line it's different from every other story that you read, which is VERY nice. Great job!

Oh my god! I teared up when Aurora was crying! And I guess I deserve the MLP:FIM hate... xP

The descriptions were perfect because it was able to draw the reader even more into the story (rather than them probably hanging onthe edge of their chairs). I can already tell that I'm going to love this more than I already have because of All time low ( and the sexiness that is Jack barakat) and of Breathe Carolina. This is probably just going to be something from me, but I kinda wish there was a prequel to this so that we could see how the girls were formed, they reactions to being in Warped Tour, how they met the guys, if their relationships had any ups or downs; basically just anything to have a little history beforehand (but that's just me though). Subscribing, recommending, and dying over here for the next chapter.

omg! all time low. jack barakat. yes yes yes! i am so excited for this, i am subscribing. this is wonderful! i really love the description and everything about this. the plot is wonderful. i can see this all in my head going on and i love it. i want moree!!!!

I am super excited for this story *rubs hands together* AND you added T. Mills with All Time Low. Victoria likey.

Comment Swap is mint because I can find perfect stories like this... but then I see that they're just starting out and I have to wait for updates waaaah.

This is actually beautiful though, okay?

I havnet noticed spelling and grammar errors.. but im not one who look hard or cares, so no complaints there.

the story itself is ok. its kind of one of thoes "I put my self in the story because i want it to happen" kind of a thing.... which i get but not my deal. It is written ok though. im just not to interested in the story. how ever if there is sex in the next chanper i will return to c ur sex writing skillz ;P good luck :)

I love the layout! It is very simple, and it does not hurt my eyes like some layouts do! This story is weritten very well, and I love all of the bands that you mentioned! the part about "Mr. Nipple Freak" made me laugh very hard. You have done an amazing job, so please keep up the good work!

This is such a nice beginning =D i can not wait for you to continue the story, you captured the personality of a guy perfectly xD chinese food and sex! :) keep writing cause your good :) and i get mad when people stop what their good at! <3 i'm so subscribing to this :D

Nice layout, it's very easy to read which is always good. It's simple and elegant. As for the content of your story I love that your first chapter title is from an old Hollywood Undead song. Secondly I like how you transition by starting with a positive aspect, like how great of a state CA is, but then drift off to how it can also be a nightmare. It's good to soften the impact by good things, and not just bring of the bad stuff from the jump. I feel that your story is going to be the same way, a good start with some rough scenes. Nicely done.

Ok so this is really cute, i kinda like that they are already a couple, by that i mean in many jack fiction either he or she spend half the story bidding for the others attention. its refreshing to start a story with them together, though it does intrigue me to where you are going to take this story. im excited for it :)