Missing Smiles - Comments

Update soon! This is really good

That was so freaking cute

great. I am glad she is going to stay. I hope he gets his memory back soon so he can explain what really happened. I also hope that when his memory does come back, he will remember everything that happened since he lost it too

I think it's a good idea to stay maybe it will help get his memory back somewhat. Love the update :)

I like that he actually lost his memory, makes for an interesting story. As for the whole Carly thing i'm torn. I want her to stay but at the same time you can't just assume someone is cheating on you. Ih ope Kaner gets his memory back and stays the way he is with out it. I like reading this. I just hope Kaner can keep her.

I'm loving every chapter of this story, keep writing :)

jealous much kaner? wow. great chapter.

I really like this story! I just found it and read all 6 chapters and I'm really into it! i can't wait to see what's going to go on next!

go back..definitely go back. Start over. I completely agree with what her dad said.

Love the update, I think she should go back to see him :)

Comment swap sent me here and I'm actually glad it did. Even though I've only read the first chapter so far, I really like where the story is going. I loooved the part about speaking in cursive, I never would have thought to write that! Very creative using it in the story. I am about to read the rest, just thought I'd drop a comment.

Nae<3

This is a great story! Extremely well detailed with the beginning and well written and very descriptive. I started just reading but the beginning pulled me in and just got through reading. Great job, keep it up!

How Carly acted towards Patrick in the beginning was awesome, especially the part about speaking in cursive, very creative. I'm not into sports at all so I didn't fully understand what your main guy plays or much of that. But this also reminds me of The Vow, and you've got a good idea going. Keep it up and update soon :)

Wow I really like the story line you have going! This is a fan fic right? Because it has a really nice way of making you forget it is a fan fic. This kinda reminds me of The Vow, if you've ever seen that movie. I just wanna see how she reacts because she can't be all perfectly calm all the time with him when she knows she's been forgotten about right? Haha I guess I'll just wait & see. Nice work.

Aw that was sad! You can tell she cares about him so much but he screwed that up. Hope he remembers and tries to fix it!

that ending was so sad. She put up with so much. She must really love him. I hope he can fix it.

I'm late to the party, but I really love what you're doing. I hope Kaner gets his memory back!

Enjoying this story so far..looking forward to more...

Ooh no!!! That was a low blow, I can't wait to see how everything plays out from here!

That was HARSH! Talk about a stab in the chest. How is he going to fix that when he starts remembering