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  • haleyluv87

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    i really enjoyed your story! your a very talented writer! i read it all at once Very Happy can't wait to start the sequal!
    September 16th, 2012 at 03:30am
  • Party.All.Night.

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    This story was so cute! I loved how Lenore had two jobs and a life away from Sidney. During their break up I liked how you showed thier conflicting emotions. I also loved how you used the song. It was different and you didt base the story off the song like people usually do. The ending was cute too. I liked how you didn't have a fairy tale ending.

    Great entry. Winners should be announced by the 25th :D
    July 1st, 2012 at 11:21pm
  • MusicLover525

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    Loved the story! It's cute! I love how Lenore is developing. I think you wrote the story close to reality, her fears, worries and last but not least her changing and kinda letting go. :) I'm glad that she went to Sidney! AND I think the end was genius. You really do pull through with you ideas, like the way you referred to their past conversation about the perfection? I don't know, I just love how moments like that are mentioned again! ^^
    June 23rd, 2012 at 09:34am
  • k-dubs

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    Not a fan of the ending! Anyway how can it be over?
    June 22nd, 2012 at 06:24am
  • k-dubs

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    Not a fan of the ending! Anyway how can it be over?
    June 22nd, 2012 at 06:24am
  • Sidn3y Crosby

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    It can't be over, what am I going to read now? Please do an epilogue, I would be forever grateful!
    June 21st, 2012 at 11:41pm
  • komula1216

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    Seriously? It's over?
    June 21st, 2012 at 08:55pm
  • Cupcake1

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    So cute! That was such an adorable ending!
    June 21st, 2012 at 07:27pm
  • hurricane9

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    Awwww! So cute =)
    June 21st, 2012 at 07:07pm
  • hockeychick37

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    great ending! LOVED THIS!!!
    June 21st, 2012 at 06:42pm
  • Penguins11

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    That was adorable! I love how you took the whole meaning of the story and turned it into the ending - I agree completely with you on the idea that the fairy-tale perfect, patch it all up and live happily ever after thing wouldn't really fit the whole idea of the story.
    The characters were really well developed without having to have a ton of backstory thrown in, which is incredible - and I love the interaction between the characters!

    I think you did an amazing job of it, and while I'm sad that the story is done I loved the ending!
    June 21st, 2012 at 06:17pm
  • Cupcake1

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    Can't wait for more!
    June 21st, 2012 at 04:34pm
  • Penguins11

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    Yay! I'm glad that Lenore and Sid are going to work on it, but I can't believe her studio was vandalized :S hopefully it doesn't affect her too much and she can fix it!
    June 21st, 2012 at 05:00am
  • komula1216

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    That's much better.
    June 21st, 2012 at 03:26am
  • Sidn3y Crosby

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    mzdflga;shfosfjahsfjsadhashfauertoberjnajfhadsfjoashfo They just really need to talk!
    June 20th, 2012 at 11:43pm
  • komula1216

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    that's a little better.
    June 20th, 2012 at 11:32pm
  • Penguins11

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    I hope she goes and they work it out! They're too adorable together for it to not work!

    I can't wait for more!
    June 20th, 2012 at 11:13pm
  • k-dubs

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    They need to talk, ASAP!
    June 20th, 2012 at 09:52pm
  • komula1216

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    I am not at all thrilled at this point. . .
    June 20th, 2012 at 05:50pm
  • k-dubs

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    NOOOOOOO
    June 20th, 2012 at 05:47pm
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