Oh my goodness, I feel so badly for Eleanor! It's so sad! Again, I simly love this. I love how Eleanor says everything so wonderfully and I feel so bad for her but at the same time, I want Louis to be with Bailey. Though I love him with Eleanore :( The ending when he's talking to Bailey is absolutely just yes. I have no words for it...OF COURSE YOU GET A RECOMMENDATION AND A COMMENT ;)
Well....you could read mine ;) It's called Newspaper Girl. Or Chromatically Challenged :) or Carve :) Either one of those.
Even though I totally just edited this, and may I say I did a really good job, I didn't read it until I posted it for you and omg harRY. YOU SWEETHEART. I like to imagine he is like this in real life and just my god. everything about this chapter was perfect.
This is incredibly well written. You definitely give a new outlook on a 1D fanfic. I really like the freshness of your writing. You hold emotion really well in your writing too. Can't wait to read more! :))