So, Long Live Us - Comments

Comment Swap brought me here and I'm glad! It's so not cliche like every other ATL story. She wasn't some random fan and all the boys aren't instantly falling in love with her like most of them. It's almost always the classic 'I'm beautiful but I call myself ugly 24/7' this isn't in it and it makes me happy that someone has some originality. I love it and I can wait to read the sequel!

I can't remember if I wrote a review for this or not, but I'm from Comment Swap. Usually I'd jump at reading a Alex/oc, but I don't seem to be in an All Time Low mood. From what I read, though, was truly amazing. I liked how you had Maddison be Jack's little sister and not some unknown fan off to the left side of the stage that appeared out of nowhere, because that means that Alex knew her already and may have looked at her as if she was more of a little sister at one point, but with tour and everything it can really change a person's views on someone they know.
I liked the bit I read so write a sequel for your fans :)

The beginning was a bit generic, but I do like the connection and relationship Maddison has with Jack. I definitely enjoyed the "puffball" comment about him. Made me smile. Although, I do think it would have been best, for certain readers like myself, if you had put spaces between breaks of dialogue and paragraphs. I know it's a bit late now since you've finished, but for future reference, the big blocks of text can strain the eyes, making it uncomfortable to read.

Comment swap sent me, and wow I'm glad I got a good story. First off, your characterization is amazing. That's just...I have no words. And secondly, that letter she wrote Jack, I started crying. She's such a sweetheart, and really. This was amazing.

ok going into a corner to cry because of the immense feels from this chapter, soo cute !!

asdfghjknfmhbnkkkj . omg perfect. awwwwwh maddison & jordan are already adorable!

first off, amazing story! I love it! but seriously lisa is a total bitch, & everyone else really needs to realize that!

comment swap sent me! :)

i LOVE All Time Low so I was excited that I got to read this story. There definitely does need to be a sequel because it ended so abruptly! I was so sad! And things with Jordan--I would've liked to read how they mended things and more about them being friends, etc. since Maddison stated at the beginning that she didn't really have any of her own friends, that her friends were Jack's. There were a few moments that were just sooo cheesy and i wanted to slap some self-respect into Maddison after she realized she loved Alex even after he deserted her at the beach hahah

other than that, your writing style is clear and it was a fun read :)

this story needs a sequel omg i cried when she said bye to jack

i just found this story and i love it soooooo much! this story needs a sequel!

Sequel please!!

who wouldnt want a sequel?!!?

sequel!,

I think the ending was great!
It would only be bad if there isn't going to be a sequel.
Which I can't wait for! :D

No, don't end it so soon!
Will there be a sequel?!

aww i love poor maddison, i hate her being hurt i feel so sorry. ALEX i love him but damn hes a b*****d, great story though your a really good writer xxx

I. Am. Going. To. Kill. Alexander. William. Gaskarth. That is all <3 Still have love for him though he's just making me mad.

god damn it alex!

Aww I love this story it makes me want jack to be my brother haha grrrr at Alex that's all I'm gunna say haha

I haven't even started the story yet, and the disclaimer got me to laugh out loud. "I do not own All Time Low (sadly)." PREACH IT SISTA.