Where'd Ya Go? - Comments

Ah, ok. I see, I've never actually run into it before. Quite an interesting idea, actually.

I have only read the first chapter, so I have not yet come up with a particularly definitive opinion yet. I will say that the first chapter did do a good job of keeping me interested and I will for sure revisit your story. The premise is unique from what I've been reading as of late, so expect me to return!

And with more to say. I feel like I babbled about one thing the entire time.

Apologies, haha.

There aren't any links to do that with, the fertiles and doms in each story are somewhat different. There are plenty of fertile dom stories, most pertaining to My Chemical Romance. But other than that, what do you think of the story?

Oh, very interesting indeed. I had never heard of the Fertile and Dom concept before. I was a bit confused at first, but caught along eventually after I did some research.

Could I suggest linking some facts about Fertile and Dom in your summary? I had no idea what it was, and when I first started reading it was somewhat distracting not knowing what was going on.

I don't know, perhaps I just haven't been exposed enough to the idea.

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Chibi

Dude, you're the best. These updates make me smile. You should keep updating. ;)

Oh, and she's jelly of Bryan.

Dude! Her and Pete would be adorable together! <3

Oh muh gawd Hayden!!! How can you not see it!!!??? It was not a slip of the tongue!!!!!

OHmygod......please update this. Please. Please. Please. Please. Please. Please. Please. Please. Please. Please. Please. Please. Please. Please. Please. Please. Please. I love how Billie Joe is the antagonist, yet he has only appeared by word of mouth intead of in actual form. Adds a sort of mystery you know. Kinda like a, "When we meet him is he going to be as bad as everyone says of worse?", sorta thing you know. Ohmygod! Please please please update. Pete is an absolute DOLL In this story. God I could eat him for dinner he's so cute. Anyway, I like the way you incorperated a little bit of everyband. I think Falling In Reverse should be in here. Just to balance out my hatred for Craig. OH well, not my story is it? (x But I really do love it. :D CHOW! SO so sooooooo gonna sub. :D And rec!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is very cool. I like how Billie Joe is portrayed as almost 'the bad guy' instead of Mister Perfect. Damn. *subs and recs*

Comment cherry!!!!! Lol I like Pete in this story