I had sort of a creeper grin on my face when I saw you had updated. I swear, nowadays, I only look on Mibba to see if you've updated. LOL That being because I no longer get notifications..wtf?
Anyhoo, I loved it! The sarcasm and the way they interact with each other is so cute! The ending brought back the creeper smile. :D
I know the feeling of feeling like a negligent parent. Not literally of course just figuratively speaking. LOL You as always inspire me to write! I probably won't but ehh... ;)
Hope you update again tonight or tomorrooooowww!!!
HA! Loved that part! TEAM EDWARD BTW!!!! :D This story is gonna be a favorite of mine, I can feel it! And Ryan Gosling being the star and all well...*whew* let's just say I can't wait until things heat up between them! Sorry for my perviness...
I like this chapter just because it makes it more book like when you put in little scenes like this. Also, it shows that Ryan's on her mind...I mean...could you blame her? :) Definitely looking forward to tomorrow! You inspire me to update...I think I might...I think I shall! :p
Oooohhh I like this. Their attitudes toward each other in just their first meeting is hilarious! That's how I envision my future husband to be like...the attitude...the whole Ryan Gosling thing... :D Anyhoo, as always I love your stuff and can't wait to read more!