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  • DaniGates

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    Mibba is an alternate universe. I feel the same way. Lol! I loved the update! I seriously want to just squeeze Liam and take all his pain away. Ugh. I can not wait for more!! And please let that be soon! :)
    February 21st, 2013 at 06:21am
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    WELCOME BACK LIGHTNING MOMENTS!
    February 5th, 2013 at 12:10am
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    WELCOME BACK LIGHTNING MOMENTS!
    February 5th, 2013 at 12:10am
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    WELCOME BACK LIGHTNING MOMENTS!
    February 5th, 2013 at 12:10am
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    WELCOME BACK LIGHTNING MOMENTS!
    February 5th, 2013 at 12:10am
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    Wow.....I just realized how long that comment was.....TOO BAD. Teehee.
    February 5th, 2013 at 12:10am
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    Wow.....I just realized how long that comment was.....TOO BAD. Teehee.
    February 5th, 2013 at 12:10am
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    nature reminded it that it could never love, never get close to anyone, without harming them. GAH PERFECT.

    WHO CALLED HER? I DEMAND TO KNOW. :P

    It was playing hide and seek in the sheets hahaha that sounds so cute.

    THAT IS A BEAUTIFUL PAGE BREAK

    Hahahahahahahaha their bantering.

    AHAHAHAHA I NEVER SEE YOU EAT AT SCHOOL OH LAWD THAT DOESN'T SOUNDS FAMILIAR OR ANYTHING...........

    DOWN REBECCA. :P

    HOLY FUDGEEEEE THIS CHAPTER IS LONG YAYAYAYAYA

    AHA Louisssssssssssssssss

    OMG! Rebeccaaaaaaaaa penguins. OH lawd.

    Oh child. Questionable things.

    Hahahahaha it's not a date. BUT YES IT IS. *runs away*

    It sounded like the strumming of a guitar. REBECCA THAT IS PERFECT. *wipes tear from eye*

    OH NO. Nonononononono NOOOO. NO CRYING LIAM.

    Never heard of it. Oooo CHILD. :P

    JBVHGIOWEISJDCHUVFOGWIEJLSDHUFGIOEQJA EMOTIONS GOREISNUHBEOWIJASDVHUOIWEJ

    THEY NEVER DRANK THE TEA

    REBECCA IT WAS COMPLETELY WORTH WAITING MONTHS FOR THIS CHAPTER BECAUSE THIS WAS BETTER THAN ANYTHING I'VE WRITTEN HOLY CAKE POPS NO.
    February 5th, 2013 at 12:09am
  • We-Go-Down-Fighting

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    HAHA Back when I had no idea what Mibba was and I just read this story without commenting.......Oh CHILD.
    February 4th, 2013 at 11:55pm
  • skinny love.

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    I don't care for the POV changing every chapter... Try something new. Other than that I really like this.
    February 4th, 2013 at 03:35am
  • Caitosaur.

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    This layout is very.... narrow.
    November 23rd, 2012 at 11:31am
  • DaniGates

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    This is such a fantastic story. I'm so sad that Liam has a tough life. I'm also glad that Mika is there to be supportive for him. And that last chapter was amazing. The picture..... Feels.
    November 16th, 2012 at 08:04am
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    How the heck did I just find this?...UGH...I'm gonna read it tomorrow..I need sleep!! But..gaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
    October 12th, 2012 at 03:34am
  • Little Robyn;

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    ARGH!!!! NO, IT DIDN'T WORK.
    Whatever. It was the couch Liam.
    August 5th, 2012 at 07:05am
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    ARGH!!!! NO, IT DIDN'T WORK.
    Whatever. It was the couch Liam.
    August 5th, 2012 at 07:05am
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    .......
    and this.
    [img]https://p.twimg.com/Ayx6Kj-CEAEX96V.jpg:large[/img]
    August 5th, 2012 at 07:05am
  • Mogar.

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    Ugh, I was nearly teary when I saw the shirtless sex god. my heart! T-T
    August 5th, 2012 at 06:27am
  • We-Go-Down-Fighting

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    Ugh. Liam. No. That was just straight in the terrible sad feels. I absolutely loved how this chapter made me almost tear up one second, and then had me snickering the next. You had a great balance going between the sadness of Liam and Mika's conversation, and Louis' commentary in between. :)
    August 4th, 2012 at 09:47pm
  • Little Robyn;

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    YOU ARE THE MOST BEAUTIFUL HUMAN BEING EVER TO BREATHE AND I LOVE YOU SO MUCH.
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    Since I read the majority of this chapter over messages, I'm not really going to comment that much since you know my thoughts already :) I love Liam's story. It's so dark and horrible, but I love the fact that Mika is there comforting him and hugging him :) GREAT JOB.
    August 4th, 2012 at 03:17am
  • Little Robyn;

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    Oh goodness :) Louis I totally get.
    July 20th, 2012 at 06:08pm
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