Lightning Moments - Comments

Oh. Mika, poor girl.

Please update this? :D

HAPPY BIRTHDAY ONLYTHEGOODDIEYOUNG

Still laughing. And I'm totally like those boys whenever my brother convinces me to play a game with him. Why does it never block!?

I'm going to apologise for not reading this sooner...

I love it. Update faster, though that might not be possible because it seems everything I read lately is an onlythegooddieyoung co-write and I want to know how she keeps up. Subtle hint.

But yes, Mika is a beautiful character and I need to know about her and Louis in this is an absolute gem. And Liam is so sweet.

"I pulled my backpack up further on my shoulder as I journeyed into the gym. I used it every day after chemistry as a shortcut to English on the other side of the school." YES. I DO THAT AT SCHOOL. THROUGH THE GYM TO ENGLISH EVEN.

I love LIam in this chapter :) He's so very sweet and generous and kind and sympathetic. Love :)

Oh my flipping glob, this story is so amazing..you guys need to update very soon!

So many things about this chapter that I love. First, I love Mika. She's so likeable and she's a great dynamic characters. Second, the mystery about her nightmares is quite intriguing and I'm curious as to see where it leads to. Third, I like Ms. Spears. Fourth, I adore Louis in this chapter. He's such a goober and I love it ;) Great job!

I'm very very interested in finding out more. :] You have me hooked

Updateeee soon!! I like it :)

I really like this. So cute so far.
Update soon?

I love the curly hair :) And I love how Louis is all like '58! Better than last time!" I adore that part :)

I just realized you're writing two Liam stories 0_O And I figured out the reason for the screwed up layout ;) I'm just retarded.

Love it :)

This sounds cool so far! Can't wait for more!!!

The layout is funkified...but I like this :)

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Liam Payne can have my babies.

I love this.