Beginning of the End - Comments

I've only just started reading this, but I can already safely say that this is the zombie story that I was waiting for. I've stumbled upon quite a few of these on here, but this is definitely the best. It's clever and easy to read at the same time, and damn, I'm going to read the rest of it now!

HOLY CRAP!!!! I love this story soooo much! It's beautiful! It's so subtle to the underlying meaning of your work, and is breath taking. Truly, its a story to be praised soo much.

BTW: I am on the comment swap, and I was hoping you could read my story; Woven into Legends. Thanks, and again, I really love your story.

I MISS THIS STORY SO MUCH

Okay so, just sayin', I MISS THIS STORY.

Seriously, I miss it so much. Honestly, I feel like my and your zombie apocalypse stories are like the best. Lol. And I'm going to be updating mine reallllly soon, so I hope you will at some point, too! Because ugh. I need more of this.

I would just like to start off by saying how freaking attractive this layout is. Everything about this page is just really appealing to the eyes. Anyway, I really love your writing style because everything flows so nicely together. Ever since I’ve watched the Walking Dead, I’ve been scrounging around for some good zombie stories to read! Glad I found one!

"Brian," Abiail calls, grabbing his elbow in her small hand. little typo!

What the eff? Brian isn't her uncle? What is happening? I must know. update nooooow.

Wow. I love it. I went through a phase of absolutely adoring zombie fiction a while back, and I haven't read any for quite a while, so I'm rather excited. Your first chapter really sets the mood, and you use some fabulous languge throughout. Most zombie 'fics start by throwing you right into the action, and this changes it, and I really do love how this works so well. You build up an air of suspense throughout, and I think you've done a fabulous job of that, especially in the first few paragraphs of chapter one. Your description and writing style are really good, and everything seems to flow effortlessly for me when I'm reading.

You're really doing a good job here, and I'll be subscribing to find out what happens next!

This is really good! I read the first chapter and it was really descriptive. It definitely built the suspense for me!! :)

Oh, shooks! You're gonna' make me blush.

Thanks for the dedication, this chapter although short, was still just as brilliant. I can't believe Brian! I trusted that guy... :)

That sneaky man, Brian is. Lol. I'm glad Abigail is okay, though. I thought something was going to be wrong with her. D: And I'm intrigued to hear more about this Brian/Rita situation. Something's not right. I CAN FEEL IT. xD

Thank you for the deds! I'm glad I can help. ^_^.

this is honestly the best zombie story I've read... so far. lol. -recommends, subscribes-

Oh no! I hope Abigail is okay. Is it bad that I'm not that fussed about Rita. I guess it's because she's just been all unconscious and stuff. Great update.

I apologise for taking so long to read this update. This story continues to amaze me with how fantastically written it is. It was great to get to read the rest of this chapter. I remain a dedicated fan, keep it up!

I always love me a good zombie story. So far this is really well done, I enjoy it a lot and I like all the characters so far. I'm excited for you to update and to see what happens next. :)

For some reason, when I click on the link to this story and it pops up, I just get excited. Hahaha. I think it's because of the layout and the banner and stuff. Everything just matches so well together and explains in such great detail of what we have to look forward to, ya know? I also enjoy the characters quite a bit. I definitely think Cillian Murphy & Scarlett Johansson were really good choices for the male and female leads. Their images in the banner play really well off of each other and, not to mention, they're both really good looking. ^_^.

I can't wait to see where you take this story, as I'm sure I've said before, but I can't say it enough! Update soon. <3

OH! The chapter I had already read before anyone else. I feel special xD This was a great chapter, of course. It was interesting to get more insight on the characters, but I can't wait to see more zombie action :D And thanks for thanking me :3 aha.

So far, I like Abigail because she is nurturing and kind-hearted. I also like Allison because she is smart, blunt and is more of the survive-no-matter-what-or-who-else-gets-hurt kind of girl. Well, at least, that is how they both seem portrayed in my eyes so far.

I like Brian, though. He seems like a good guy and doesn't get mad with Allison being all hard-core cautious and protective and such. He appears to be genuine, understanding and grateful. I like him :D

This story is fantastic! I am definitely subbing and recommending this :)

By the way, the female in the title banner looks familiar...does she play in any movies?

HAHA. I love the ending. It was a nice touch. I am curious as to how you will portray your zombies. If they become smart...well, let's just say being in an apocolypse with just zombies is scary, but an apocolypse with smart zombies would scare the freaking hell out of me.

Not only do I find the dates you put up helpful, but the action you write in here is very intense. It is nicely detailed without being over-the-top. You are quite a talented writer. This really is a great story so far and I really enjoy reading it! Now onto chapter three! I suppose it's chapter two in your story, but chapter three is what Mibba is telling me, aha.

Oh, wow! I love zombies and the beginning chapter of this was eerie and perfect and amazing and chilling and any other word out there related to the four I have just described!

I love zombies. I am a zombie geek, so this just makes me all the more happy to find an original fiction story on Mibba about them. I can't wait to get inside the main character's heads and see how they survive this apocolypse. This is going to be great, I can tell just the way you have beautifully written the prologue that describes the overall happenings of the virus.

Great job!

I'm back to comment on the update, which is great, by the way. I have a bit of concrit for you;
"Allison leads Brian unstairs" - upstairs?
The ending leaves the fate of the girl unknown but for some reason - most likely to do with your brilliant characterisation - I trust that they will save her, if not do there absolute best to try and do so. All in all, a great update.