i love your writing. the style, the content, the subject, especially the characters ;) but really, you're a very talented writer and i look forward to reading more of your work :) if i had one comment though, you use the term "raven haired" quite a lot in reference to Jack and "elder" in reference to Alex. It seems just a tad repetitive in my humble opinion.
November 22nd, 2012 at 09:48am