This Ain't Goodbye - Comments

  • hephaestus

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    Summary/Layout: GLEE. Just had to say it. Uh, great layout. I'd prefer if it weren't so tiny but hey, I think it looks classy and pretty. The summary pretty much summed up what I already knew but with insight. I can't wait to start.

    Chapter One: Cute. I think it accurately portrayed summery as well as the Sam/Mercedes romance. It was short and simple and yet sweet all at once. Can't wait to see where Sam's taking her.

    Chapter Two: Nice use of a flashback, first off. Not many writers can effectively write one and you totally mastered it. Another cute chapter :)

    Chapter Three: Beautiful chapter. I'm glad it ended well and you tied it up just nicely. It was very cute! Great work.
    September 24th, 2012 at 03:29am
  • Annabelle Graceton

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    This was really cute and really well done! Congrats on winning the contest! You deserve it :)
    July 8th, 2012 at 08:41pm
  • Kawaii Emotions;

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    I loved this so much! Sam and Mercedes were always my favorite pairing. I wish they would stay together forever. You did really great, very realistic and true to the characters.
    July 3rd, 2012 at 07:01pm
  • tabula rasa.

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    That was adorable. I think you ended it really nicely! This was a great piece, and I think you did a really good job with this pairing. Thanks for joining my contest, and I should be posting the results soon.. I'm just waiting on one more entry. Cute
    July 3rd, 2012 at 02:17am
  • Annabelle Graceton

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    Awwww seriously cute! You are a very good writer and I find your chapters really nice and easy to read :) Eagerly awaiting the final chapter! :-p
    June 30th, 2012 at 07:37am
  • tabula rasa.

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    This is wonderful! You do such a great job conveying the emotions between Sam and Mercedes. I just want them to be together and happy! I can't wait to see how this ends, but I'm sure it'll be great. Fabulous job with this. Cute Oh, and I love the mentions of Bieber in the chapters; it's funny! tehe
    June 30th, 2012 at 06:24am
  • Annabelle Graceton

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    Awww this is cute! I look forward to your next chapter :)
    June 29th, 2012 at 04:05am