Imagination Is for Turbo-Nerds - Comments

Please update! And yes, I could really imagine this as a real episode. :D

Okay, I read the summary and it was like, FOMG YES.
This is like the best cartoon ever invented.
I have very high hopes for this story.
Which means SUB, REC and THIS HERE COMMENT.
Update to make us all happy. :3

Ok, so, I don't really know what Adventure Time is. Hahah, I've never seen it before. But from what I read in your summary and your first chapter, I guess it's good... Your plot is very intriguing haha, I like it. It's a great idea. I like how you give the characters so much life, and Jake is kind of funny. I like him. I don't really know how to give you feedback on this since I don't watch AT.

I didn't see any grammatical errors so that is great. The layout is amazing, I absolutely love it. At first, I found it kind of annoying that you wrote things like, "Jaaa-aaake." But then I figured it's because that's the way they talk in the show? If that's the case, then I think it's great that you write it like that because then you let the reader imagine a little how the characters talk. I don't think you should give up on this story. You seem to know exactly where you want this to go and it also seems like you're very enthusiastic about writing it. If I were you I wouldn't let lack of comments, or readers, & whatnot, keep me from writing the story. Of course, that is totally up to you.

What I mean to say is that I hope you continue with this story and I wish you the best of luck on it! Great job.

(I apologize for any bad english.)

Ok, so, I don't really know what Adventure Time is. Hahah, I've never seen it before. But from what I read in your summary and your first chapter, I guess it's good... Your plot is very intriguing haha, I like it. It's a great idea. I like how you give the characters so much life, and Jake is kind of funny. I like him. I don't really know how to give you feedback on this since I don't watch AT.

I didn't see any grammatical errors so that is great. The layout is amazing, I absolutely love it. At first, I found it kind of annoying that you wrote things like, "Jaaa-aaake." But then I figured it's because that's the way they talk in the show? If that's the case, then I think it's great that you write it like that because then you let the reader imagine a little how the characters talk. I don't think you should give up on this story. You seem to know exactly where you want this to go and it also seems like you're very enthusiastic about writing this story. If I were you I wouldn't let lack of comments, or readers, & whatnot, keep me from writing the story. Of course, that is totally up to you.

What I mean to say is that I hope you continue with this story and I wish you the best of luck on it! Great job.

Haha this is sooo cute! I definitely pictured this as an episode. I could hear their voices in my head and everything.

Seeing as I am a big Adventure Time fan, I could picture this story in my head as an actual episode sooo perfectly:) Especially the part right at the beginning when Finn asked what Jake was eating and Jake was all like "Nothin' man" and Im thinking, wow that is def. something he'd say. But anywho, please keep going, I love this! :)