October 25th, 2015 at 02:48am
Harry Potter <3
Your layout is amazing and the way you write is Incredible. The name nixx is really originally and unique.
I really do hope that there's more where this came from!
I'm definitely subscribing
Okay, partially rambling because I a) have drank too much coffee, and b) am on a severe syntax studying kick. The story all around was very well written, had a very nice flow. But that hook definitely hit close to home, so thank you so much for that.
You know when you hear something unintentionally too true? Yeah. And then you laugh because, "Oh, crap. I'm not the only one who had been somewhere in their life with a mindset to write something like that." I think that's what turns me on so much about shared writing. It's the full explanation of your soul without it having to be too true.
My only criticism: try to break up your sentences a little more. Shorter ones, mid length, and then the whoppers. It's a great exercise to learn more of a tactful art in syntax, but it also reads like a melody.
Anywhoozle, thank you for writing!