Family Is All It Takes - Comments

So first of all thank you for getting your entry in only a few of you did. Than I have to say I'm very impressed that you actually got a full chaptered story in, that made my day!!!!! I got a couple of one-shots and a short story!!!! So the fact you got a full story in, kuddos to you!!!!


Now on with the story at first honestly I didn't like Mac. She was just kinda rude to Brandon. I mean I understand that she was upset because her best friend Jordan got traded. But she took that out on Brandon when it wasn't his fault. Though I'm glad that Mac changed her mind about Brandon and gave him a chance as a person.

They were uhhhh, let's say sickenily sweet as a couple (I mean that as a compliment)!!!!! Also I'm not a fan of her mothers, I just wanted to kick her moms arse!!!!

I felt so bad for Brandon when she just took off and for the rest of the boys also. You could tell how much the whole team cared about Mac and Jake. But I'm glad she came back so the boys and Brandon could stop worrying!!!!

Well thanks again for the entry!!!!! I believe I have 1 more entry that will hopefully be in by Wednesday. So I will be announcing winners on Friday so keep an eye open!!!!

Oh.. I feel really bad for Brandon and boys

I can't wait for next update :)

poor mac...update soon!

This is so great! I just really love Brandon Sutter :) Please update again soon!

i love this! update soon!!!

cute...update soon!!!

good update! loved her opening up to brandon...update soon!!!

this was my fav chapter...that ending, his last thought was really sweet...loved this! update soon!!!

this was my fav chapter...that ending, his last thought was really sweet...loved this! update soon!!!

update soon!!

she was married? wow...update soon!!!

update soon!!! i LOVE this!!!

i like the story, and Mackenzie's spunk. I'm just a little confused as to why she's angry with Sutter. Obviously, trades happen, and players usually don't have any say about it. She's a sports journalist, she should get that right? Anyway, can't wait for chapter 6.

i loove where this story is going!

Found this through comment swap. I really know nothing about hockey at all so I can't comment on that aspect of this story. But I really enjoy reading this story anyway. It's a great plot and I like your characters. Mackenzie is such a great main character. I love reading this!