What Lies Beneath - Comments

This is amazing!! I can't wait for the sequel!!!

You did a really great job on this story. I can't wait for the sequel! :)

That was an intense story. She seemed to be the one thing that could show Loki what it was really like to live and that there was more to it than vengeance and hate. I can't wait for the sequel to come out.

Wow, what a ride. I really enjoyed your story, and your heroine. I hope we can see Loki redeem himself in your sequel.

Oh god! LOKI MOVE YOUR ASS!!!! *runs around flapping arms* We need a Bat signal or something to get his attention to tell him to move his ass. Like oh my god. I sooooo can not wait for the next one.

Oh god more feels!!!! I can't wait to see what happens!!!!!

Oh God. All the feels. So many feels. He deserves a never ending happiness and yet a jealous ex had to take it all away from him. Such an awesome story that I found by chance and have been reading everyday for the past 3 days to catch up. I love the way you have written that he was starting to heal and become something better than what everyone thought that he was capable of. He deserves to be happy, if only for a little bit.

lmao Thor and Felicity are in some SERIOUS doo-doo...especially Thor. Yes, they should have gone to Odin, but alas, they did not, which is only going to add to things when it all comes tumbling down! Update or two should be up tomorrow :P I'm on a writing binge :D

Felicity and Thor are in some big doo-doo. Not to mention the fact that they didn't ask the All Father if they could go down there, which I'm assuming that they needed to do. I like though, that Loki woke up from her being hurt, and he feels her pain. Can't wait for the next update!

The truth has surfaced! I love her reactions to Fenrir telling her about his brothers and sister. Especially Sleipnir. "She'd been riding one of his kids?" lol. And at the end when she was mocking Thor for being scared of Loki.
I can't wait for your next update! Loki is going to go batcrap crazy when he realizes she went with Thor to go speak with Sigyn.

haha yeah probably, she was very clever with lots of things of that nature. I can say I have respect for Rowling knowing that now lmao

Oh goodness, I'm going to be updating like crazy, I've made it a mission from god right 'bout now
cause I'm about tired of not getting chapters up cause the real world is a total loser :P
Lmao I just got She-Hulk...and I'm glad I did...she's tearin' stuff up!

http://www.lokithegodofmischief.com/lokis-children.php
Yeah, I found this site right after I posted. I think JK Rowling was just trying to be clever by using Fenrir in her books. I also found out that Loki can change into any animal he chooses, and into a woman as well. Weird.
Also, I'm pretty sure that as soon as I found out that my boyfriend was a God, I would Google him and play twenty questions with him. And then snuggle under some blankets in front of a fire. Hmmmm.
Yeah, my Thor is going crazy on all the missions right now. He's tearing through all the bosses. He's an absolute beast right now.
Please update! I have sorely missed waking up in the morning without it.

To answer your question MusiChick, it's from Norse mythology...Loki had several children, I think...6 in all....4 of them were from this Jotun woman who was bat shit crazy...and all of them came out animals or deformed...lmao it's interesting actually

ty guys for commenting on my story, I'll be getting an update up tonight or in the morning first thing. Had real world shit going on and haven't been posting as much.

Please finish this story! i have read it non-stop and it amazing! You are a fanstatic writer and i beg you to update as soon as you can!

Please finish this story! i have read it non-stop and it amazing! You are a fanstatic writer and i beg you to update as soon as you can!

Please finish this story! i have read it non-stop and it amazing! You are a fanstatic writer and i beg you to update as soon as you can!

Please finish this story! i have read it non-stop and it amazing! You are a fanstatic writer and i beg you to update as soon as you can!

please continue, i am like completely confused right now! how the hell is Loki making animal baby's? and why? please just explain this and make Loki better, i don't like injured main characters..

Um...actually...Fenrir from mythology lol not Harry Potter >.<...Loki has 4 children by a frost giant (who is a crazy bitch btw) Fenrir, the oldest...The Worlds Serpent....Sleipnir the eight legged horse....and Hel...keeper of the unfortunate dead in the underworld...and uh...knowing that most of his children are animals...all i can think is WHAT THE ACTUAL HELL?

Finally got the silver to upgrade my Iron Man...I'm so happy I could cry lmao She-Hulk...I got her the other day, haven't had a chance to use her yet though, but what i've seen she is really good! lmao if Loki comes out as one of the new heroes....i'm gonna die!

Plaid....um...lol glad you're enjoying the story....and I know....all the loki feels are just awful sometimes

Fenrir.... as in Fenrir Greyback.... as in a Harry Potter character.... hmmmmm.... I'm really liking it. And Loki is his father, and they just rode on one of his other children, the horse. Hmmmmmmmm.... And Loki is still hurt. I wonder how Tony is going to react to Loki and seeing that his son is a wolf. This just gets curiouser and curiouser.
Yeah, my Thor is getting bigger and badder by the minute. And my Iron Man is almost at level 9 and I don't have 100,000 silver yet. urghla. I also heard that She-hulk is pretty good if you don't want to wait for command points to buy Thor or someone else. Oh well, and my brother also said there are 37 places where they are going to come out with more heroes, and there is a good chance that Loki is going to be one of them. Yay! I shall evilly laugh with you. MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!