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My goodness, that man does not know when to keep his mouth shut, I'd have slapped him too! Haha I want Mikey to go in for the kill >:3 Gerard's reaction will amuse me... But, alas, you are the gifted writer! It was another fantastic update!

@ Join the Masquerade
:O YAY! So excited!

@ fragilewords
I was literally eorking on just that this morning ;)

Updateupdateupdaaaaate. Please? :)

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Gerard <3 I haven't read any MCR fan fiction in a long time. They're also my favorite band of two years now. :')

I love the description and though this doesn't have much to do with the story itself, I feel like it'd be more popular if it had a nicer layout.

Chapter one:

The way you open this is glorious. I like it when stories start out right away in the first scene. The way you describe everything is great and it makes for amazing imagery.

I feel like you introduce all the characters too quickly. I would've saved that for the second chapter and kept the first chapter for introducing Jennifer and her mom only.

"Wanna go upstairs and fuck?" Sounds like something I'd say. And better yet, it's how a few people actually are. :P Awesome touch.

AAAAAAah, love the way this ends. I think I might actually read up on this. Great story. Only thing I don't like is the layout.

Oh, Gerard, you sly devil. I don't know what to expect from the next chapter but I do hope he doesn't completely ruin his chances. HOWEVER! He is a bit of a pervy perv haha. I love it :) Will she meet up with Rebecca and have a few words at all? So many questions!

ok, is it too soon to 'hurl abuse' on you? Cause I love this story

@ YvonV
I'll have to reread the whole thing XD I don't remember this at all... except Gerard being rotten >.>
BUT! I shall hopefully be able to update after that. Or start something new and similar that doesn't feel so confusing and plotless :S

when will you update?:D

Comment swapper here. Let me just start off by saying thar I appreciate on so many levels you telling us this would be cliche and filled with fluff. The detail you provide gives it a good flow as it all ties together to create a well written story. Stunning job you've done.

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Okay, first off, I like the layout! Good color scheme, very organized! Also, I like the characters so far. She's just the right amount of naive and headstrong. And I like the blunt way you portray Gerard! Good job so far. :)

Update update update :) One of my favourite stories!

updateupdateupdate. :) This is literally my favorite story.

Wow Gerard was forward, talk about ego. Perverted isn't the word, cocky is more suited :O Cheeky git. Does it sound weird that the description you gave of him in the woods turned me off him even more? His head sounds madly inflated so far!

I like Jennifer's character though, she's like me in a way: don't drink, smoke, play around. We're both prudes and proud, and immensely fond of attracting bad boy characters!

Good chapters!

DON'T GIVE UP ON THIS STORY!!! NOOO!
Great update, tho! :D

That was a great update :D I kind wanna see her and Mikey try something to piss Gerard off >:3 it'd be hilarious to see what unfolds.

Y U NO UPDATE?????!?! D:

I'm going to say it again;
UUUPPPDAAAAATEEEEEEE!!!!
I told you, never leaving you alone. I'm in love with this story :-)

So glad you updated! :D and I'm excited for the next one!

Hmm. That's weird. I wonder why he's acting like that... But...
YAYYY. I was so pathetically happy when I seen that you updated, you have no idea, heh. And I'm with LaerkeTimeLow; I'm never leaving you alone because this story is too good, lol.