This is my new favourite story! You absolutely MUST update soon! I need more! This story is my new drug. I'm addicted, and if you don't update soon, I'm going to go through withdrawal! DX
Well first I must say good job with the spelling, grammar and sentence structure. I can read it with relative ease which can be a blessing when going through and reading some people's stories. I do wonder though, how long have the main characters known eachother now? That is something that I find all too often in stories is that the characters fall for one another MUCH too quickly. Still, I do like these two together and I enjoy how much they are foils to each other regardless.
Either way, I hope you keep updating because I wish to know why Gerard tried to off himself!
Now I'm even more confused, but I'm gonna research those things you mentioned in the author's note so I can be less confused about those. Great update :)
Comment swap! I don't listen to My Chemical Romance but this has a good storyline. You got something going on here. And I'm very appreciative of the fact you embraced the NC-17 rating. I hate when people rate shit like that and it ends up being kiddie. Keep up the great work!
I'm seriously fucking confused as to what is wrong with Gerard and why he's being such a creepy psycho. Guess you'll have to update again and clear it up for me ;)
I'm commenting again today just because I like this story so much. I really, really wanna know what Gerard's deal is now, cuz he just keeps getting weirder and weirder. I'm also interested about her past. Great update!
I’m so happy comment swap gave me a band I actually like for a change. I really wanna know what happens next in this story and what Gerard’s deal is. I for one would not be walking in a forest with that guy unless I wanted it to turn into an episode of Supernatural. Definitely subscribing and recommending!
I love your layout, I love your spelling, I love your grammar and I love the storyline! It's definitely an interesting concept and I will definitely be coming back read more as you progress!
I love your layout, I love your spelling, I love your grammar and I love the storyline! It's definitely an interesting concept and I will definitely be coming back read more as you progress!
I love your layout, I love your spelling, I love your grammar and I love the storyline! It's definitely an interesting concept and I will definitely be coming back read more as you progress!
EEEEEH. Ok basically, I'm so not into MCR fics, but more (only) Frerards ahah. But thIS OMG. Ok update, yeah? yeah. I want more of it please please please. I can already imagine a little of the plot line and it seems really good and man your writing is amazing ok? Ok. So yeah, update :3
Aw I loved this too. It's an amazing story. I can smell it :3 trololol It's different I mean it's quite opposite to all the other stories out there. It's realle nice, I just recommended it and subscribed to it :3
Hmmmm well this was interesting so far. Ugh cheep vodka. You know THAT when you smell it! I do have a slight bone to pick with your layout. Your link color isn't very visible on the left side so you might want to make it a little darker. But other than that, a good start to the story!
first off, i'd like to say that i don't ever read My Chemical Romance fanfiction because i'm not too familiar with it, but this story shows a lot of promise, i like where this plot is going. also, i really liked the descriptions and vivd imagery used here. keep writing!
I was soo glad when I got this story and not some stupid One Direction one.I love MCR! you have a really good beginning going. I'm exicited to see where you take this! update this lots!
So, I like the idea you have going on. It seems like it's going to be a really good story. It's weird though, like I told the last person who wrote an MCR story, because they all seem to begin with some type of move! Haha, it's still good though. I've never seen Gerard written in this way, so it's going to be a good story to read. Keep it up(: