i'm not a huge fan of MCR fanfics and suffice it to say I was entirely creeped out reading this one. It didn't help that it reminded me of a relationship I had been in just this past year. However, if your writing was capable of evoking such emotion in me, you must be doing something right :)
Also, I love how the layout starts off blue but as you scroll down it becomes more happy and cheerful with the beautiful trees and forest. Hopefully, the story plot line follows the same pattern xD
comment swap :) I have to say that I'm not familiar with the characters of your story, but your style of writing really intrigued me from the start. Your writing is very readable, if that makes sense. And after I started reading, I couldn't wait to read the next sentence. It's really awesome that you can achieve that, so well done! Oh, and the layout is really cool, too :) I enjoyed this very much, well done! Keep writing!
So she's secretly into all those things..? I KNEW IT! :D is it bad that this story is so addictive....nah. (: & YAY, TWO UPDATES IN ONE DAY! :D if there were three maybe you'd get a virtual cupcake from me(:
Aww, he's so cute:) haha, she should tell him how she feels instead of just holding it back, maybe of she shares her feelings they can get over them and just get married because they're so cute:) hahaha
Hey...you know what you should do...? update soon...BECAUSE I LOVE IT:D this is such a weird awesome way to see Gerard, & I find it kinda sexy of him...is that wrong? ...oh well. More soon please!? (:
Normally, I wouldn't stick with a story like this (Gerard ant be mean! D:). But, it's just so goddamned addictive! And I cannot WAIT to see what happens next! Update soon! :D
I'll be honest with you, this story makes me giggle. I love it! I love her paranoid fear, and how he is such a complete ass. It's honestly fantastic :]
I love this story, your writing style is so unique. Gerard is such a creep, wtf is wrong with him? But he seems extremely sexy, is that wrong?! Cannot believe he's just blackmailed her to pretend they are together. This story is amazing, cannot wait to read more xxx