Lola - Comments

yo i love this so much it's way perfect and also i imagine lola as
cara delevingne


or meag west


or sharon kavjian


and nastya kusakina


or like a young little lara stone she's absolutely beautiful

anyways this story is perfect and this comment is probably going to be miles long lol but i'm so excited to read more!!!!

Woo hooo! I can't believe I didn't notice you post this. Hm. I can't descibe who Lola is in my head because she sounds the way some one I'd once known looks like. Sickeningly pretty, womanly, but equal parts innocent and seductive. Hm. Amanda Seyfried with darker hair and eyes? I think. And paler than the tan she usually is. Taller too. lol.

Oh my gosh, I just can't get enough of this story. It's lovely and it captured my interest right away, and for that I'm thankful for. The characters are developing quite nicely, and so is the plot, which is flawless. The chapters are short, sweet, and straight to the point, which I also nice. I imagine Lola as a Sky Ferreira, or this other model, Rebecka S, or like some girl with pastel colored hair. I don't know, maybe the girl in the banner. Anywho, please continue this story because I'm dying to read more. I've already subscribed to this.

Keep it up!

I love this. Omg. I kind of see Lola as...hm, well I can kind of see Ginta Lapine since that's the girl in the banner, or even Nastya Kusakina. She has the innocence with sex appeal. Or maybe Fifi Newberry. I love both Nastya and Fifi so maybe that's why I see her as them haha.

I feel like an idiot but she strikes me as a young, Megan Fox. Lol. When you say sexy that's who I think. Weird, I know.

You have a small error in the description "is the flowers the grow" thought I'd give a heads up. The parts are short but even with that you have definitely grasped my interest. Especially with the part where she wasn't always who she is remembered as. And that part is just sticking out in my head and about how true that is after people pass. It also makes me curious who is telling the story, I almost want to say it's her brother o.o if he was just someone who went to her school though =/

It seems a really interesting read, I am sure to subscribe and read more, honestly I do hope you keep this up.

This is wonderful!

This seems like a really interesting story. I can't wait to read the rest! -A

In a couple hundred words, you captivated me and captured my heart -- as you always do. I'm quite sure that there is nothing that you can't effortlessly write and/or pull off. The premise of this is perfect; totally short, sweet, and to the point, yet always enticing and guiltily hooking. I'm curious to find out who this person is, Lola's "medium" of sorts, and who Lola really is - or, was - and what she did to not be called a saint and how she died. Already, the gears in my head are turning at the infinately amazing possibilities of this brilliant little story. I seriously cannot wait to read the rest (: