I can't wait to see her rant at Ovi in russian, set him in his place. oh that would be amazing. But i'm liking that you're keeping Sid real, he's not some super hero who changes his rituals. good job. -S
I opened this because i immediately thought oh rivalry. But seeing the interaction i think i might like this a lot, the only thing that bothers me is you kind of assume that the reader will know what D and SSM are. Pretend we're stupid and don't know even if you know. But otherwise i really like this. i'll be subscribing. -S
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