(Scribble Out) Conscience - Comments

I need an update D:

It can't stay like that! Talk about cliff hanger :O

so you are never gonna update this... are you?

hey can yous update this? I will loves you forever.

I'm gonna die a sad and updateless person.....

mean evil horrible wretched person you is. updates love!!!!!!

spamming your page now... I will force you to watch raunchy gay porn until your eyes bleed if you don't update at least once in the next two days...

You are evil... My soul is gonna give you bad luck into your next ten lives. I will force you to break a mirror, and then run a bus into a mirror shop and break every single fucking mirror. EVIL!!!!

Update! :C

patient streak over.... pile of bone turning to dust in the wind...

:(...................

I has been reduced to a festering pile of maggot food... Seth is coming for you...(with a very large knife! He wont kill ya, just cut off your toes... lol.

So... I jumped off that bridge... I only broke my leg and one of my arms... and fractured part of my spine... fortunately I woke up only moments later, realizing I'd jumped of the balcony, and Nothing was broken just REALLY sore... but still. UPDATE!!!!!! BEFORE I SEND SETH AFTER YOU! He'll kill ya... I swear he will.... UPDATE! PPPLLLLLLEEEEEEEAAAAAASSSSSEEEEEEEEEEE!

WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU! ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL ME! IF YOU DON"T UPDATE SOON I"M GONNA GO JUMP OF A BRIDGE AT RUSH HOUR!!!! PPPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE UPDATE SOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!

and my world has come crashing down, as I see there hasn't been an update. I know school is tough, and I'm not aloud to say anything (drop out that I am) But PLEEEEEEEEEEEEASE! PRETTY PLEASE BLOODY PULP WITH AN EYE ON TOP! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

So I think you should update this story <3

Bold I see. Quite an interesting unraveling. Things are starting to get quite interesting.

Omg.. i need you to update this asap! lol. Like this isn't exatly like what i usually read but i am really liking this. (=

So I have finally gotten around to actually doing my to-do list (crazy concept I know) and this was obviously on it, on top. And dear god, I think I might have to drop out of the contest because there is hardly a way I can top this alrbsksndbs it is just oh my god amazing. I seriously just devoured this in one sitting and am still pining for more because this is just thirty different kinds of awesome! :3

I'm not an avid incest reader, I'll admit but i seriously just love this and Max and Tyler and they're weird sort of brotherly but not brotherly fucked up relationship, and seriously the entire time (especially the last chapter, Christ) I'm just chanting in the back of my head "nooooow, kiss!"

When he was all can I have a kiss goodnight? On the lips? I DIED. I JUST DIED. I was MOVE TYLER DO IT PLEASE and they have so much fucking sexual tension and chemistry whenever they talk its like are you trying to kill me!?

Max has really grown on me, I just, he is like grown man puppy that I want to hug forever despite him being you know, manly and probably bigger than me. You can tell that he's really torn up about it all and it still haunts him and he tries so hard to be the good kid and he is he just you know messed up once. I just want to hug him forever. :c

I like that even in his voice you can tell he's sort of a farm kid and not very city like, and I don't know I just think that's pretty cool how you either did that purposely or unintentionally it's pretty sweet. c:

I really hope that Tyler can find some sort of solace in something and start cleaning up his act because obviously he is smart if he tries. I understand though, the reasoning behind his rebellion with all the confusion and trauma in his life. He definitely gets a lot of hugs too. I just want them both to be happy forever and ever, IS THAT TOO MUCH TO ASK!?

I definitely like too how you don't really glorify the incest either, it's like the nitty-gritty take it or leave it type story and seriously you've pulled it off so increasingly well honest.

This is seriously such a good story and I shall be greatly anticipating updates with more Max and Tyler and STILL NOT OVER THE GOODNIGHT KISS THING. xD

Love it! Please upddddaaaatttteeee!!!!! :3

WUV IT!

haha, awesome xD x3 i just love your stories more and more with every chapter !