August 21st, 2012 at 01:28pm
(Scribble Out) Conscience - Comments
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Yayy, an update!! Cute chapter^_^August 21st, 2012 at 07:31am
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Lol how awkward is it that he messed up :p. "How about the lips?" Totally obvious.August 21st, 2012 at 02:11am
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YAY! Tyler is so obviously into him! XD! I can't wait for the real kiss! XDAugust 21st, 2012 at 02:11am
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YOU LIE! YOU SAID YOU WOULD HAVE IT UP BY NOW!August 20th, 2012 at 11:54pm
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I've died of sadness.....August 19th, 2012 at 06:33pm
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I really like this, can't wait for an update.August 16th, 2012 at 05:40am
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-currently throwing two year old tantrum- Why!!!!!? Update! I'm dying here!!!!!August 15th, 2012 at 05:44pm
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HOLY SHIT PLEASE UPDATE THIS IS FUCKING AMAZINGAugust 14th, 2012 at 04:17am
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Whaaaaa! Ima throw a two year old tantrum over here! UPDATE! WHAAAA!August 11th, 2012 at 08:06pm
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Interesting tale. Merely a glimpse into the full picture. Me likey. Update pleaseAugust 10th, 2012 at 08:21am
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Wow, this is really good. I wouldn't usually EVER read an incest-based story, but I found it on the contest page and I just thought, hell, why not, and it is so good. You've written it well and it's a good perspective. I mean, I still find the idea of incest so so wrong but your point of view as Max really shows the strength of human emotions. Nice job!August 4th, 2012 at 09:53pm
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AHHH! OK. I just started reading this, and I am top-to-italy in love with it! Updates please!August 1st, 2012 at 01:32pm
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Tyler is totally into him :3July 31st, 2012 at 11:55pm
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i'm so glad i have internet again so i can read stories haha x]
well, i'm not a guy and don't have a brother, but brother's are closer than friends, so it might not be that awkward xP
yeah, i really like this story ^^ for one, most of the stories i read have two POV's in them, so it's a nice change to read a story with one guy telling it. two, i'm kinda a sucker for brother/brother lol and it's on a farm and they don't have a lot of money, which also isn't the typical thing. also, it's realistic as well. with Max being gone and coming back to help and Tyler being so rebellious and staying away from home and everything x]
a longer comment than usual, huh? xDJuly 31st, 2012 at 11:12am -
I was right!
Tyler wanted a longer hug. :)
It's not just Max's imagination! :D
Update some more soon please. :)July 27th, 2012 at 04:52am -
I LOVING IT! XD >.<July 24th, 2012 at 06:47pm
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I'm really excited to see how this turns out :) So far, I really love the characters (excluding the father, he seems rude). I can't wait to see how you develop the story; it's gonna be super interesting ;) hahaJuly 15th, 2012 at 05:42pm
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I like this one!
"Not the right things" it is so going to be his brother that turns him on!
Hahahahaha
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Keep up the good work. :))July 5th, 2012 at 02:25am -
yay x]
you might be unsure about it, but i'm sure it was perfect xDJuly 4th, 2012 at 06:24pm
Update soon?