(Scribble Out) Conscience - Comments

Olala ;) haha, love this.
Update soon?

Yayy, an update!! Cute chapter^_^

Lol how awkward is it that he messed up :p. "How about the lips?" Totally obvious.

YAY! Tyler is so obviously into him! XD! I can't wait for the real kiss! XD

YOU LIE! YOU SAID YOU WOULD HAVE IT UP BY NOW!

I've died of sadness.....

I really like this, can't wait for an update.

-currently throwing two year old tantrum- Why!!!!!? Update! I'm dying here!!!!!

HOLY SHIT PLEASE UPDATE THIS IS FUCKING AMAZING

Whaaaaa! Ima throw a two year old tantrum over here! UPDATE! WHAAAA!

Interesting tale. Merely a glimpse into the full picture. Me likey. Update please

Wow, this is really good. I wouldn't usually EVER read an incest-based story, but I found it on the contest page and I just thought, hell, why not, and it is so good. You've written it well and it's a good perspective. I mean, I still find the idea of incest so so wrong but your point of view as Max really shows the strength of human emotions. Nice job!

AHHH! OK. I just started reading this, and I am top-to-italy in love with it! Updates please!

Tyler is totally into him :3

i'm so glad i have internet again so i can read stories haha x]
well, i'm not a guy and don't have a brother, but brother's are closer than friends, so it might not be that awkward xP
yeah, i really like this story ^^ for one, most of the stories i read have two POV's in them, so it's a nice change to read a story with one guy telling it. two, i'm kinda a sucker for brother/brother lol and it's on a farm and they don't have a lot of money, which also isn't the typical thing. also, it's realistic as well. with Max being gone and coming back to help and Tyler being so rebellious and staying away from home and everything x]
a longer comment than usual, huh? xD

I was right!
Tyler wanted a longer hug. :)
It's not just Max's imagination! :D
Update some more soon please. :)

I LOVING IT! XD >.<

I'm really excited to see how this turns out :) So far, I really love the characters (excluding the father, he seems rude). I can't wait to see how you develop the story; it's gonna be super interesting ;) haha

I like this one!
"Not the right things" it is so going to be his brother that turns him on!
Hahahahaha
:)
Keep up the good work. :))

yay x]

you might be unsure about it, but i'm sure it was perfect xD