Dizzy Up the Girl - Comments

I am amazed at the level of skill you have in writing. I'm not that big of a 1D fan, but I am loving this story! Please update as soon as possible because I'm hooked. I cannot wait to see what happens next and I'll be thinking about this story all day while I'm at school. I'm not gonna lie, comment swap did bring me to this story, but I'm very happy it did. The whole cancer thing can be a very touchy subject and I think that Elizabeth's personality really matches my own. I'm excited to see what adventure her and the boys get into next! Love love love this! I'm going to tell all my friends about it!

nice layout! also great writing. i feel like you have just a good amount of detail; i know what's going on but i don't feel overwhelmed when i'm reading it. this plot can be a little bit overdone but i feel like it will develop nicely. it sounds like a nineteen year old girl's writing it, rather than a lot of the pretentious overdone writing a lot of people have sometimes. but at the same time, it's written very well. there are a few cliches but honestly who doesn't have cliches? i think you've got something really going here

I LOVE the layout, and the title! Dizzy Up The Girl is such an incredible album.

The first sentence sucked me in. I really love the world you've created, it's so detailed and interesting. The main girl has my attention immediately. She's so refreshing and real and I adore that so much; I feel like an old friend is telling me a story.

I'm a casual listener of 1D so I don't know their personalities like, at all, but they seem grounded in this story, which is always great to read. It's so sweet they aren't rushing to tell Ellie who they really are. It really ties into all the media we hear about celebrities wanting to be treated like normal people.

I love the pacing of the story, that not everything is answered right away. I'm so intrigued as to why the group is there!
I really enjoy this so far- you have a knack for keeping the reader interested and involved.

Wow I really like this story and comment swap brought me here but it’s fabulous omg. I really like the layout because easy to read, but you have enough to accent your story nicely, and hey, it’s about 1D so that’s a major plus right.? You’re very descriptive and you’re really good at spelling things right and using good grammar which is what I look for in a story! I only wish there was more to it and it didn’t just cut off like that. Oh well, that’s a comment for another day. I love your work and thanks for writing such a great story

wow your story defiantly caught my attention, i like how your detailed and descriptive without going over board, easy to read, i didn't see any misspelled words, which I'm thankful for. i really like it, you had my attention with the first sentence i hope you write more please and thank you :)

Wooow! I love this story! I wonder if Harry fancies Ellie? Oooo?!? Keep writing, I absolutely love it!

So apparently the comment I left before wasn‘t good enough for Mibba‘s Comment Swap. -_- So that means I‘m leaving a second comment. This one better work.

Comment Swap brought me here, as you should know. At first I was hesinat because of the title (dunno why), but I had to give it a shot. But now I love it! I love the way Elizabeth (sorry it‘s 6 AM here and I haven‘t slept yet) met the boys and I love how they treat her. The first chapter had me hooked, even though I‘m not a One Direction fan. I have notcied a very few tiny mistakes, but it just looks like ya hit hit the wrong keys. I don‘t blame you. :) You write really good, a lot better then me. I look forward to an update! :) Keep it up!

@ AndStuff
Niall Horan, he‘s from Ireland, so I guess the name Niall would be from Ireland :)

Read the first chapter. Looks like it's going to be an exciting story. Possibly a little sad as well. Never heard the name Niall before. Where would a person with that name be from? Just curious. I didn't notice any grammar or spelling issues, I'm not the best person to check into that however so having other's opinions on that would be a good idea. You have a good start here. Keep on writing. Great job!

I only read the first chapter; I'm not the much of a One Direction fan but this is good. Like, I became hooked on knowing what was going on. I'm terrified of reading this because I know it's going to make me cry. Well, the cancer aspect will. The paragraphs were good, the grammatical errors and spelling errors.. wait what? There weren't any. So! Nevermind about that. But this story is so good. Good luck with this love!

I'm in love with this story. The entire plot is incredibly original. I love the little love triangle between Ellie, Niall, and Harry. Very intriguing. Keep it up! -A

I'm not a fan of One Direction in the slightest. What brought me here was the fact Ellie has cancer. I am a cancer survivor myself. Anyway, I really liked this story, it was a nice change of pace from the usual. Keep writing! I'll be back for more. xx

The Comment Swap brought me here. I'm glad it did! It's an amazing story and I haven't seen any mistakes yet! Great story, I recommended it and I can't wait for more! :)

loved it :)

This is really good
:)

I'm so glad that comment swap sent me here.
While I'm probably the person who is least into One Direction, I actually really enjoyed this.
You have an absolutely amazing way of writing and I must commend you on your grammar and punctuation.
I loved reading this, thank you for creating something so nice to read. (:

As the person below me, I was also directed here through comment swap. And just like that person, I'm not a One Direction fan. It's not like I have anything against them, I just don't really care for them either way.

That being said, you should know that this story still managed to capture my attention. Your way of writing is wonderful, I love how you are descriptive without it getting boring. You also created a wonderful character in Elisabeth. Despite the burden that the cancer is putting on her, she still manages to be brave. She seems like a strong girl and very fun to hang around with.

As a non One Direction fan, this story isn't for me, but it's well written and I'm sure the 1D fans around here will love it! Very well done!

Was directed here by comment swap :)

Firstly, well done for keeping my attention. I'm probably the furthest you can get from a One Direction fan, so the fact I kept reading after reading the summary means you've did a good job, haha!

I love the first chapter, you can really sympathise with Elisabeth. The only thing I noticed (and this is me being pernickity), is that 'draft' should probably be 'draught' if it's talking about a cool wind. Again though, that is just me being overly-picky. Chapter two and three are also really good, and I love how you have Elisabeth being pretty awesome, even though she's got cancer. And her reaction to one direction would probably be the same as mines! I only know one of them, and he has curly hair. So I'm reading this as original fiction, almost, haha!

The only real criticism I have is that the layout is incredibly difficult to read, or at least I was having problems. But apart from that, this is a really good storyline, and you've thought the plot through quite well. Well done! :)

OMG! It's a 1D fan-fiction! :DDDDDDD I love that and them, and to have it about Niall is absolutely amazing :) I haven't read much of him. I like the description you put and I like what you've done with the layout for the funny Irishman. keep it up brah, I'll be back :)

Hi, I came here from the comment swap.
I really enjoy your main character's voice, I can hear their voice really easily in my head, if that makes any sense.
I like the idea of her having cancer but still having a laissez faire approach to it.
Also, I think Niall is a really cute name :D