Broken Miracle - Comments

D; Cynthia is sorta meean.

Update(: Lool, so much sex.

i see a relationship forming lol really good

My gosh, the first few lines of the story kinda made my eyes grow wide. Heheh! It had totally drawn me in. So far, it seems really interesting and it was the summary which really grabbed my attention. Some of the stuff there made me laugh, such as 'bitchzilla' loool! Anyway, it has a really good plot and I don't want to sound like a critique or anything but there were some words which you didn't finish spell out...and some punctuation and grammatical mistakes as well :s But other than that, it's going good! I shall continue with where I left off :>

really good

I find this story to be pretty good :)

I'm interested to see where this goes.