So I did a story search to see if any story had the same title as mine. This was the only one. Haven't begun reading it yet but if the summary holds true it's gonna be amazing.
EDIT: it's fucking amazing. Hope there's an update soon. Even if all previous comments are from months ago.
Rip it apart huh? Well, that means I'm allowed to be mean? I love doing that, but i can't really think of anything to say. uhh.... discription? lol Really i love it because its the perfect balance between explanation to get the story going and the plot itself? Does that make sense? And the chapters are the perfect length because I'm not bored and i'm not asking for more. Well, i am because i really want to know what her dad has to say, but i mean that i'm satisfied. Man i'll try harder to tear it apart next chapter ;)
Oh man oh man oh man. This is amazing. I adore your writing style, it's so clear and easy without being dull. It's a cool twist on the cruel experimentation storyline, I don't think I've ever seen this point of view before. You made the main character very interesting and engaging without looking like you're trying too hard. You've certainly captivated me with this story. So many questions I want answered. More please please please.
EDIT: it's fucking amazing. Hope there's an update soon. Even if all previous comments are from months ago.