Troubled Youth - Comments

Hmmm, I see. Now it kind of makes sense and I feel so bad for Jared XD and how dare Ella keep that to herself! Sure, Jared kept the cheating thing to himself, but at least he ended it with freckle face (can't remember her name at the moment and dont' much care for her anyways. She was a bitch anyways, haha) To let it burn out on it's own was cruel on Ella and Jared's part. What if Alex thought everything was going smoothly and was waiting for Ella to end things? It would have been painful to just stay in a relationship no one is happy in and I couldn't live with that guilt seeing my boyfriend while living with the proof of the now tainted relationship. It sure did shine some light on Ella for Jared to see that Ella could be keeping things from him in the near future. She wouldn't be completely truthful and just keep it to herself until the boyfriend comes and ask for himself. So many baffled moments in this chapter, but it was great nonetheless. Can't wait for the next one in three days! :)

Ella is just a confusing specimen haha she is just up and down when it comes to Jared. I would be just as frustrated, she gives these green lights about how she is feeling towards him and then she puts him in the friend zone. That must hurt because in all honesty, one person can only stay in the zone for so long before they snap and give that person an ultimatum for their own sake. I laughed when Ella had no shame in watching porn, no girl is proud of that if they do watch porn so her being comfortable just had me in stitches.

I was thinking why her mother has such a hold on her father when he should be able to see his daughter if he wanted to. All because of sex, she disconnected herself from her daughter? That is the dumbest thing I have ever heard. Her father shouldn't be hiding the fact that he sees his daughter, clearly he doesn't like confrontations with his wife or doesn't want any extra hassles for choosing his daughter over his wife. I do feel bad for Ella since all of what has happened to her has really taken a toll on her, she just bottles it up until she explodes. She really just wants to bury her feelings by sleeping around, doesn't she? I feel like Ella goes around sleeping with guys to avoid whatever feelings she has and conflicts she doesn't want to deal with.

Btw there are some sentences that have missing quotation marks, so it left me a little confused at first if the person was still talking or not. I think it happened twice in this chapter, can't remember.

Can't wait for more

This is an amazing story that needs more recognition! I love the concept of them being fuck buddies and before Jared got famous. It was so cute how Jared was so withdrawn and Ella was the one that helped him bring out is inner freak each time. Ella is different than any character I have read, seeing that she didn't like attachments but sadly that didn't work out as planned I see. I got giddy that Jared was fully aware of what he was feeling about Ella. I want things to get messy between them. It would be an interesting read to see how they change throughout the years and how they make each other tick and piss each other off. :) this story is getting me all excited. I hope that you update soon. It's too good to let to leave it here.

I really enjoyed chapter 1 and I'm looking forward to reading more! :)

I ke it so far can't wait for the next chapter