There Is a K in Nikole. - Comments

Well, just finished reading everything.

Honestly, the only reason I clicked on this was because of the title and the small description. I wanted to give it a chance, and I guess I'm a sucker for average girls' lives being turned into not so average. If it's done right, that is. And I can say that is the case with your story. I mean, I'm not a fan of the way you write your dialogue and action's narrations when they're conversing, it was odd to me. But it didn't get in the way of the real story, of its real purpose, to entertain I'm sure? It was entertaining; the three girls were amusing to read about. I enjoyed it all, the simplicity of high school life, the "badump" of your heart beating when you talk to someone you like, or that person that you like invites you to a party. I could relate to every single thing, even though I haven't really been through to any of it.

It's cool how you portrayed everything. I hope to continue reading this and for many awesome chapters in the future. :)<3 Good job.

p.s., I'm subscribing.

Good update! Never met anyone named Christmas either.... haha.

I really liked the first chapter. The idea of Nikole is really unique, and she seems to be totally relate-able. However, I was disappointed when the quality of writing made a downturn. The lack of quotation marks for the dialogue and the parts where you use ** to mark an action are disheartening. It's of good quality, but those two things make a story a lot less appealing.
Keep writing!

Nikole definitely is a unique character. She has a name that is so different from the typical style but yet she seems to be so average. The K in Nikole becomes very symbolic throughout the story as she grows and matures. Thanks for the observation!
PS-I never met one with a K either, but yes with a C and a CH. :)

Hmm, Nicole has some interesting thoughts about her name? Doesn't she? I've never known a Nicole with a K or a CH!