Pallid - Comments

I just want to hug everyone and tell them it will be okay. Except Ullysses cause he's a douche.

omfg. such, such surprise. Wasn't even expecting this. I seriously wonder for Celeste's well being. She cray.

I hate Ulysses.
He's ruining everything for everyone.

Bless her heart.

Aw okay, I'm starting to sympathize with Celeste. This story is wonderful :)

just how...
this bitch cray.
i don't even know, bee, I think you outdid yourself on the feels here, it's just so short but so full of confusion and angst and gah, it's good! I can't wait for more :)

Aww this chapter made me care for Celeste...=]

are we maybe starting to get somewhere with celeste holy fuck, i definitely think her asking whether or not he meant it when he said he thought she didnt love him is a good sign in the sense of her either starting to maybe think twice about the way she's been treating rhys or it's her being difficult (in regards to the ending and how she runs away from her problems and buries them in chain smoking) i love rhys and if him and celeste dont work out (but i'm hoping they do goddamn it) i'm gonna turn him gay and take him for myself tbh. i can't wait for the next chapter and corny is a great way to roll i approve

WOW CELESTE YOU'ER A BITCH I HATE YOU
it's okay Bee, I have a feels river~~
so expect me to crey you a river.
RHYS IS SO PERF THO.
I LUV HEHM.

He's a bit of a cunt for ratting but I understand why he did it.

auuuuuuugh celeste is such a spoiled brat! I hope she redeems herself or something and I la la love sassy Rhys!!! poor rita hey should get together maybe tehe! I love your updates bby ;-) xxxxx

rhys is the fuckin man for standing up for himself to ulysses because that whole interaction could have gone in a completely different direction. "Celeste and pretty boy here've been doin' the deed for ages now. You know, making the beast with two backs, knockin' boots, all that fun stuff." i loved that part just because his tone is so casual even though he knows how much he's screwing him over with rita being right there and rhys is enjoying himself which is the best goddamn part. also omg at you and your continued corniness with 'you don't bite, hard' you are wonderful

I don't think you understand how much I love Rhys, especially after this chapter.

Maybe you do. Probably. BUT OH MY GOD, RHYS. YOU SHOW 'EM. Ugh, he's perfect. I want a Rhys in my life, dammit. Surely, I won't be his Celeste because that is just messed up, but give me a Rhys. plz.

Update soon! :)

O U GO RHY, U GO! ;D
GET IT, GIRL!
FUCK YOU, ULYSSES


you really are perf Bee
OMFG YES ME AND ALL MY FEELS~~
please update soon? ;D

I really fucking hate Celeste.
I really, really do.
poor Rhys.
OMFG YOU USED ASSPOLES.<3
I LOVE YOU.
CELESTE WHY DON'T YOU GO TO HELL?!
YOU CAN SUCK ALL THE COCK YOU WANT DOWN THERE
GODDAMN SHIT
please update soon c:

I just love this so so so so much. I cannot even express my adoration for your characters. Each chapter has brought me closer and closer to Celeste and Rhys. I find them enthralling, and endearing, and I wish there was a less mundane word for it then love but there isn't, at least not in my vocabulary. I love that I can hate Celeste and still find her so captivating and amazing. This is so so good. Amazing.

Yeah i love that this gets updated a lot. =p i think i'm gonna steal Rhys away and keep him for myself , so celeste can keep treating him like she doesnt care about him...

"if you love him so much, why are you still here?" rhys is great and i like how you've written his character because the more this story progresses you can definitely see him growing and i love how realistic that makes this story and he's standing up for himself and he's not taking so much shit anymore from celeste who pisses me off. i also think the line "this celeste isn't my celeste anymore" mostly because i want to know what happened to make her the way she is now. can't wait for the next chapter and omg you're so cute and corny

She's such a fucking bitch but I kind of adore her.

She's such a fucking bitch but I kind of adore her.