Pallid - Comments

Rhys is such a passhole aggresshole! (Kennedy don't do his dishes for him he's a big boy he can do them his sodding self) but holeyness is better that spinelessness wow i want to cuddle him CELESTE I DON'T HATE YOU (yet) but sort your priorities out!!! and I love how frequently you update :-3 xxxxxxxx

It is official. I am in love with Rhys.

general consensus is correct.
celeste sucks.

i hate celeste and i want to take rhys for myself and do the dishes for him and say i love you to him without being drunk because that's the kind of things celeste should be doing BUT i like the fact that he's growing a little bit more backbone and finally standing up for himself and hopefully that'll lead to fuckin good things later in the sense of being able to get what he wants. such a good story and i cant wait for the next chapter

Okay you have convinced me to stop being a silent reader. Celeste is so freaking stupid ! And Rhys <3

I HATE CELESTE
SHE'S SUCH AN ASS POLE GOD DAMN
Rhys falls too deeply for her :c

"Should I be excited?"
SASSY RHYS

I love him, I really do. He's finally standing up to her!

HOLY FUCK FINALLY!
I LOVE RHYS SO MUCH IN THIS CHAPTER BECAUSE HE'S FINALLY GROWING A FUCKING BACKBONE
AND I LOVE HOW CELESTE IS JUST DYING FOR HIS ATTENTION.
YOU ARE PERFECT BEE.

rhys is way too good for celeste but i don't like him with the other girl either. :(

I can't decide if I like rhys or not!! he seems sort of spineless but at the same time he cares about her so much, same with celeste she seems like a bitch but that's because she feels like rhys is smothering her!! but I like it like that, this is perfect because everyone has their flaws and ULYSSES!!! the ancient history geek in me freaked at that hahah and I was so sleepy when I received all those updates in one go oh my gosh so I am commenting properly now sorry about being silent before :-( and thanks for the mention angelpie but you really shouldn't have, thank YOU for such a great story! xxx

i loved the second to last paragraph, just the kind of struggling internal monologue that rhys is going through because i almost feel the same way because i want him to feel like it's okay to leave her but he cares about her and loves her and fucK (also i love how quickly you update this tell me your secret)

wahh it was just yesterday when i was the second comment and now you have thirty???? this is so perfect!! reading through rhys's point of view is like being thrown into a bag that's dragged around and beaten with a bat until all that's left is bones

(i read that off the back of a book)

(but still)

i can't wait see what happens to celeste and ♡rhys♡

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that's basically how I feel after I read a new chapter. (I have no words so I use gifs :P) Rhys is perfect, Celeste is screwed up yet you can relate to her and this story makes me have so many feels!

ew I hate Rita
I FEEL SO BAD FOR RHYS THO
HE'S SO AKSDJHCLKASD
AND SAD AND JUST
it's a little disappointing how in love with Celeste he is
cause all she's gonna do is break his heart

Ulysses lol. I always just think of the drunken president.

I AGREE WITH EVERYONE ELSE. RHYS IS CUTE BEYOND WORDS <3

rhys is such a fucking good character and i want to see how their relationship is going to go in the sense of whether or not he's going to be able to put up with her forever, or if she's ever gonna change. so dysfunctional but it's what they're used to and ah i just really like this

rhys is the cutest.

Just incredible.

I love how they are together. In a way, he's like the older brother but obviously not because they're fucking and shit. And she's the not-so-sweet-and-innocent little girl lost in the world.

Beautiful.

Aw Rhys. I LOVE RHYS.
He deserves better :(

i hate that he has to be so suspicious every time she acts like this and just the way he asks "you're high aren't you?" makes me sad as fuck and this story is amazing and i can't wait for the next chapter