Pallid - Comments

Only three? Only three?!
A part of me is glad that I found this story near its end so I don't have to wait so long, but another part of me is slightly depressed that it's ending so soon. But god, if I could, I'd recommend this over and over and over, 10x.

Beautifully written, and you've successfully made me hate Celeste. Awesome job! :) Also, Ulysses makes me think of the Franz Ferdinand song. Coincidence?

God, this story.

Ugh, I want to hug Rhys.

shut the fuck up you selfish bitch.
IT WAS NOT AN ACCIDENT
AND IF YOU'RE SO FUCKING TIRED
WHY DON'T YOU JUST DIE CELESTE
PLZ
PLZ
FOR ME
AND FOR RHYS
BUT KINDA MOSTLY FOR EVERYONE CAUSE WE ALL KNOW ULYSSES WOULDN'T GAF
BUT RHYS WOULD SO IDK.
Rhys deserves so much better, as I said before.
please update soon c:
YOU MAKE ME FEELZ SO
LA LA LA LA LIKE AN EMOTIONAL WRECK LA LA LA LA

Pretty much am addicted to every word of this story. I love it!

Oh my god. This story is absolutely amazing and written perfectly. I'm in love.

she's a fucking ass pole
ass POLE
AZZ
POHL
she can die and I WILL NOT GAF
I WILL NOT FUCKING GIVE A FLYING FUCK
BECAUSE RHYS DESERVES BETTER
HE REALLY DOES
Celeste needs to go.
she needs to go.
please update soon beebeeqrl ai luv yew c:

i never want this story to end and i loved this line "Were you happy with him? I mean, I'm guessing you were just on cloud nine when he was with your sister, but I bet you were even happier when he was beating the living shit out of you just 'cause he could--" because i love sassy rhys and any time that he genuinely sticks up for himself and doesnt take shit for celeste and i want to see him get mad at her even though he knows he cant, i can't wait for the next chapter!

i've been meaning to read your stuff for a while now so when you left that comment i finally decided to make time for it
...AND NOW I AM SO JEALOUS.
you're fantastic and this is fantastic.

She has this thing against love.
this line is so simple but so perfect.

okay so i just read this whole thing.. once I started, I couldn't stop. After reading part 28, I tried clicking to the next part, and got very upset when I found out there wasn't one yet! please update soon, i must now what happens. this is fabulous, Celeste is a real brat and needs to pull her head out of her ass, but, i love this :)

omg, celeste, stop bullying rhys like that. he hasn't done anything wrong.......... lol, she seriously needs to wake up. "we had something special", hah. -.-

Rita has every right to be mad.
I wish that Celeste would grow up and see how she's getting used.

She's such a bitch.
I just want to slap her silly.

i'm so fed up with them, celeste is such a brat! rhys NEEDS to give her some sort of ultimatum, i swear, it's like she's his bratty niece rather than his girlfriend (and i use the term lightly) COME ON RHYS

oh wow wait a sec rhys should date rita!!!!!!!!! THAT WOULD BE GREAT please update soon i'm dyinggggggg to find out what happens next, i mean this can't carry on (grumbles inaudibly about celeste's selfishness) xxxxxxx

ugh, omg. this story is so good, i can't even begin to describe it.

all the chapters are so perfectly simple and short and sweet; it's amazing how you seem to say pretty little, yet i can picture every scene so well in my mind.

i don't hate celeste, actually. i think she's fucked up, sure, but i think rhys is fucked up in his own way too, because his love for her is fucked up. but the thing is that they're fucked up in this way that makes them special; they're so perfect, so perfectly fucked up.

the sweet simplicity of everything through rhys's perspective reminds me of stephen chbosky's the perks of being a wallflower, one of my favorite books of all time. to a certain extent, rhys reminds me of charlie, and i adore charlie.

i haven't come across a story on mibba that i've been so impressed with in ages, so i thank you and commend you for that.

i hope you update soon, because i read all the chapters immediately, which i rarely ever do when i find stories (though, to be fair, most of your chapters were short so it made it easier for me :3).

okay
this is what's up
I SERIOUSLY DO NOT LIKE CELESTE SERIOUSLY SHE IS A BITCH UGH
RHYS LOVES YOU DAMMIT WHY DO YOU NOT SEE THAT
ARE YOU IGNORANT AND STUPID AND DENSE AND OBLIVIOUS
YES, YES YOU ARE
YOU AND ULYSSES DO NOT HAVE SOMETHING SPECIAL HE JUST LIKES YOUR VAGINA AND LIKES HITTING YOU
AND WHY WOULD YOU EVEN WANT A GUY NAMED ULYSSES
HE SOUNDS LIKE AN OLD MAN OR SOMETHING
UGH
UGH
SHE MAKES ME SO MAD
IM LIKE SITTING HERE WITH ANGER SURGING THROUGH ME
FREAKING
TWAT
SHE IS
man i was gonna use harlot but alex already beat me to it
THANKS A LOT ALEX

sorry i haven't commented in a while
i've been busy with work and stuff so when I get home I never feel like getting on the computer because tired

BUT HOLY NUTS BEE GIRL YOU ARE AMAZING WITH YOUR WRITING AND WORDS AND JUST UGH I LOVE YOU BBY

celeste can kiss my ass
and josh franceschi's ass as well


OK I BET THIS COMMENT IS GONNA SEEM REALLY WEIRD
i'll end it.............................................................now

I CAN'T EMBRACE IT
WHEN I FUCKING HATE CELESTE
GOD SHE'S SUCH A WHORE
ASS POLE
SLUT
MINGING MINGER
MINX
uh...
SKANK
SLUT
WHORE
but I used those already, so
OH OH OH!
HARLOT!
okay I'm done saying rude things about Celeste because they're true and um
RHYS SHOULD JUST LEAVE HER.
I really just want him to leave her, because he deserves better.
omfg maybe he should date Rita to piss the fuck out of Celeste that'd be so funny LOLOLOLOL
just saying that I'd die.
ANYWAYS.
BeeBeeQrl, you are AMAZING. c:

Oh wow.
They're broken.

This won't end well.

When will either of them learn? Ugh.
What are they doing with their lives?

CELESTE! WHAT IS THOU DOING?!?!?!

Rhys is perfect and he loves you even though you are completely screwed up! The ass with the name I can't ever spell correctly just wants to be in your pants!
Why can't you see this?!?!



Seriously if she doesn't smarten up soon, can I have Rhys?


Rita and Ulysses, you two deserve each other just go to it far away from Rhys and Celeste. K thanx bye!



This story, it's so awesome and I has so many feels and it's perfect and feels