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    Please update soon!!
    March 24th, 2020 at 06:34pm
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    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!
    March 20th, 2019 at 02:58am
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    Still waiting on an update!!!
    August 24th, 2018 at 08:42am
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    Please update soon!!!
    November 9th, 2017 at 06:58am
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    @ teenagedream91
    I want that cliche happily ever after!
    December 17th, 2016 at 10:00am
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    @ Dezi Demize
    I always change my mind whether to end it with angst or give her a happily ever after. We shall see.
    December 15th, 2016 at 09:17am
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    @ teenagedream91
    Talen deserves her happily ever after!
    December 15th, 2016 at 08:28am
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    @ Dezi Demize
    Its like how can she not, right? I mean Thor is really passionate about Talen. I love talen so much and I put her through the ringer lol
    November 5th, 2016 at 11:07pm
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    @ teenagedream91
    I feel like Jane has to know by now that Thor has feelings for the little pink haired goddess.
    November 5th, 2016 at 10:57pm
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    @ Dezi Demize
    I know! I'm so sorry that it has taken this long. I would write a little bit and then take a break and forget about it XD I'm going to try to maintain a balance on writing this story. Talen gets the short end a lot of the time in this story, now that I think about it, but hey it's her story and that's her dynamic. Thor will make up his mind. Hopefully I will catch up and finish the Dark World part before Ragnarok comes out lol
    Also the worst part is that Jane doesn't know about this inner struggle...or maybe she does? Hmmm.
    November 5th, 2016 at 05:35am
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    EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! I'm so happy you updated!!! I feel so bad for Talen, but Thor needs to make up his mind on who he truly wants to be with. He can't keep playing with Talen and Jane's hearts like this.
    November 4th, 2016 at 04:52pm
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    @ teenagedream91
    Yay!!!!! I'm so excited!!! Hope all is well <3
    September 6th, 2016 at 08:01am
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    @ Dezi Demize
    I am. I'm literally writing the chapter as of right now since I have free time. Thank you for your patience!
    September 6th, 2016 at 07:09am
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    Hope you update soon! <3
    September 5th, 2016 at 10:08pm
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    @ teenagedream91
    I definitely understand. Stay strong and keep your chin up <3
    April 29th, 2016 at 04:19am
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    @ Dezi Demize
    I know! I'm so sorry about the long hiatus! I was recently diagnosed with depression, school has been up my ass and work has been killing me. I promise to update soon or at least in the end of May when school has ended for me. Hope you understand
    April 28th, 2016 at 10:37am
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    PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!
    April 28th, 2016 at 08:22am
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    @ Dezi Demize
    It adds to the drama I think. I'm pretty good with the two main people aren't in a relationship yet, but when they finally are. I'm like er, I don't know what to write anymore lol I'm super awkward at writing couply stuff or I stare at my screen for hours lol We shall see if I can come up with a solution or in some way everyone comes out unscathed. I hate it when writers take the easy way out and write Jane off as this bitchy woman that gets possessive and territorial who drives Thor into the arms of the OC. I mean Thor is in love with Jane and in my story is already loves Jane and slowly is falling in love with Talen. So he's jumping between ships way too often lol luckily Talen is pretty easy to write and I'm excited what I might come up with next
    July 6th, 2015 at 09:39am
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    @ teenagedream91
    Damn Jane getting in the way! Lol jk jk jk. I just hope they come up with a better solution so that everyone gets out safe!!
    July 6th, 2015 at 03:54am
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    @ Dezi Demize
    She does!! Sorry about the wait. Thinking about what Talen would do in certain situations like this one, she would continuously risk her life for others. Thor is going to be pissed which he might have to contain if Jane is around them...he still is with her so yeah talk about awkward right? I promise it won't take five months to update again XD I want to update before I head to Comic Con next week
    July 2nd, 2015 at 10:02am