Gentle Heart - Comments

Talen needs to stop backing herself into corners!!! Trading her life to save Jane??? Thor is going to be so pissed when he finds (we all know he will find out). I can't wait to see what happens next!!!

@ teenagedream91
Yay!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

@ Dezi Demize
I'm so sorry for the delay! After getting sucked into the world of tumblr, I post a lot of things there now lol but I do write things for here as well. I'm not abandoning this website. Gentle Heart has been on the top of my list!! I will update this week or the following. I promise!

Please please please post another chapter soon!!!! <3

@ Dezi Demize
Thank you! Me too! I have so many plans that come into my head, but i have to execute which one would fit best in this story and scrap the other ideas into possibly another Thor or Loki story. Who knows, Talen will always be my favorite Asgardian lol

@ teenagedream91
I am very very excited for the next chapter!

@ Dezi Demize
Yes! I am working on what the conversation will be like for Talen and Loki. Talen does have her moments when she stands up for herself, but is fair for the most part. She still feels the weight of not saving Frigga, it always weighs on her when she can't save anyone much like her brother Vermundr's death weighed on her for centuries until she was revived. These things take a toll on her and with Loki pointing fingers at her, it just made it worse. Having two devestated people working things out will be interesting.

@ AcidStamps
When I thought of Thor speaking with Loki and having Talen there with the gifts that she possesses that it would be natural for Loki to blame someone other than the dark elves. That Talen is supposedly the best and couldn't even save the queen of Asgard. So the rage is there and even before this he never liked Talen or even favored her like Thor is starting to. They had several 'bonding' moments are children, but that's how far it goes.

I love this new update. I'm so pissed at Loki though for wanting revenge against Talen. I feel so bad for her.

@ teenagedream91
Hopefully they can put everything aside and come together to focus on the task at hand! <3

@ Dezi Demize
Thank you! I wanted to change some things and maybe add Talen into them so it comes more naturally and since Loki knows that Talen was there with his mother, there is resentment there. I'm still planning Plan B lol and Loki and Talen will have their talk.

Love love love the new chapter! I do feel rather bad for Loki, but after what he just said to Talen, I wouldn't want him out his cell! I hope they have a plan B!

Can't wait for the next chapter!!!! :D ♥

@ teenagedream91
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!

@ Dezi Demize
I have half of it done right now. I am working on it right now so should have it up tonight or tomorrow before things get hectic again.

@ teenagedream91
It's okay, I understand. Hopefully you'll post an update soon! <3

@ Dezi Demize
I know!! I'm sooo sorry! I just started a new job and juggling school along with it has become a life changer for me especially this week since I'm at my baby bros house because his dad went out of town. So taking care of him until today hopefully but I have been working on what I should write next and possibly could have it posted by the end of this week if not a little later.

PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!

@ crushcrushcrushed
Awww thank you so much! I feel so honored when a reader tells me that they love my work and yes I am planning on working on both stories at the moment. It's going to take some time since I'm coming back from vacay today. Talen is the one of my favs that I have created. She's just so fun to write and so different since I tend to stray from characters with her personality since I thought it would be harder. Used to be but fleshing it out with someone really helped. I know I haven't updated monster in the longest time but I am hoping to write something. That story is truly a slow burn and I didn't even realize it was lol

Talen is my absolute favorite oc ever! She is a beautifully written character. I love her so much I just want to hug her and give her the world and Thor. I love your writing style and I'm looking forward to an update! I was curious about other stories you've written and I was shocked to find out that you are also the author of Monster(one of my other favorites). Keep up the amazing work!

@ aandrandom
Thank you so much. So sorry for the long wait. Aww thanks! When I get insight on the character I'm developing with someone else I tend to make best characters and stick to it. I have said this before but I am in love with Talen she is my favorite by far and she's so easy for me to write. Ironic because I can't write shy characters without overthinking it and I'm a shy person myself lol but now she's finding her own voice and settling it. I'm hoping to prolong this as long as possible and when the third Thor movie comes out I can really continue and finish this story