Gentle Heart - Comments

An update finally!! I absolutely love this story and I love your character Talen. She is so kind and loyal. Can't wait for the next update (hopefully soon). I'm completely hooked!

@ misfitchild
Exactly and I almost didn't put Jane in the story and was going to put Sif as Thor's main lover, but a friend of mine discussed the possibilities and we agreed it was best leaving Jane, this was before Dark World came out, so yeah. Jane is crucial and if she isn't in a story it can still be great. I just like the dynamic that she has with Talen on being such a forgiving person and loving Talen despite what happened between the two of them and who knows if Jane actually hard Talen when she shared the moment she had with Thor. It might differ and tears will be shed, I can ensure that.

@ teenagedream91
i might not like Jane but she is a valued character in all Thor stories rather it be for good or bad

@ misfitchild
Talen is trying really hard to do the right thing. She's very conflicted. Not many will say that haha most will say get rid of Jane!! she doesn't deserve him!!

@ acid_rain88
Thank you for loving it so much!!

Talon is trying so hard poor thing
i still think Thor and her should end up together but i get where she is coming from with Jane.
update soon lovely

I love Thor and I totally love this story

@ Dezi Demize
I know! All the crap her mother puts her through she finally stands up to her. It was definitely the heat of the moment type thing and is very protective over Jane especially with the Aether inside of her.

I know right? It was planned but seeing that I had to think of a way for talen to be part of that conversation between Odin and Thor her interjection became the catalyst for Thor to make his move in the long run.

Who would have thought that Talen would finally stand up to her bitch of a mother?!?!

I also hope Jane will be alright!

And it's nice to see things progressing between Thor and Talen. She still deserves her happy ending through all of this!

Please update again soon! <333333333333333333333333333

@ Katie Mosing
Goodness thank you for reviewing on my stories. It means so much to me and I have to say Talen is my favorite character that I have created to the point where I might add her to my other avengers stories lol. I do have to give thanks to another mibba user and friend that has been amazing and we talked about my character development along with Thor to get him right. I almost went with the asgardians forgiving her but I thought what if they resented her? How could they forgive someone they don't relate to or consider her as one of their own in the first place? So I had to go that route and talen desperately want to make things right.

My Avengers feels are crazy after watching the new Cap Am so I just had to read this. I think Talen would have to be one of my favorite goddesses if she actually existed. I am obsessed with horses, so I can really relate to that. It's so sad that no one will really trust her when all she is really trying to do is help. I mean, I guess I can see where they are coming from sometimes, but it is still sad because I know what's going on with Talen. This story is absolutely amazing and I am already addicted to it!

@ teenagedream91
I'm looking forward to it (:

@ MamaZ
You're exactly on point. She thought if she could save Frigga then it can mend some of the fences that she destroyed along the way and gain some trust back. She was resilient in saving Frigga even when it was pointless. Sadly she will have to let them trust her on their own

@ misfitchild
It does and it rare to see this side of her. Of course it's going to show now more than ever considering the situation

I just want to hug Talen and scream at everyone who treats her badly. She cares so much about everyone and they all end up hurting her. Knowing that she could not save Frigga, I know hit her hard. I think in a way if Talen could have saved Frigga, in her mind she would have fixed some of the damage she caused. At least, that's my thinking, I could be wrong. Now that Frigga is dead, I feel that Talen will think eve more less of herself and her mother isn't helping at all.

@ teenagedream91
It does work really well for Talen, we get to see a side if her that isn't shown much

@ Dezi Demize
She's trying to distance herself but given the circumstances she naturally goes to him. But she is denying him every time he is close to doing something. She would have gone to earth if it wasn't for Jane. She can't leave knowing Jane is in danger, knowing what it's like to have something sake within you that is beyond your control. I don't have a huge scene but I'm thinking of something. Hopefully lol

@ teenagedream91
Thor's bouncing back and forth with the human and the goddess is making my head spin! If I were Talen, I'd just leave already. Maybe being away from Thor will make him realize that he's meant to be with Talen or maybe she'll find love on earth instead! <3

@ Jayme112234
It is but it's all going to come together whether she's with Thor or not :)

Poor Talen. There universe is really out to get her isn't it.