Desert Life - Comments

Loved it <3

LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I really do like this story, it grabbed my attention as soon as I started reading it. I'm a little sad that it ended to be honest, is there any possible way that you could write a epilogue? I would love to read more.

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Please can we have an epilogue? Pwease?

aaawwww.... Miles is the best :)

Is it bad i wished Gerard has stayed evil and had kidnapped Frank ha ha

IT SHOULD BE A GIRL AND NOBODY SHOULD DIE KRGOPKRGPORG ): XO

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noooooooo poor party

I got sent here via comment swap and I happen to be a huge fan of MCR as well so that's a plus, the concept of the story is really well thought out and pretty original. Though there are a few errors such as spelling mistakes and the dialog usually starts on a new line. Never the less it was good to read and you should keep going - you're a really good writer. :)

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I was sent here via comment swap.

I always loved the concept of BL/Ind stories, and once tried to write one that failed miserably, so kudos to you! I'm not the biggest fan of the layout, but then again, that doesn't matter as much, so let's ignore that. Your summary is quite good, it draws people in, but just be careful that you don't give away too much information! Also, and this is me being really pedantic, you've got incorrect capitalisation in your title, which can warrant people to report your story. Like below, it isn't a threat, just advice. 'life' should have a capital 'L'.

And onto the story. I really love the idea, and like I said above, I love stories that are based around the BL/Ind concept. The only issue I have with the first chapter is the dialogue. Each new line of dialogue should be put on...well, a new line. I'd also suggest having a quick look over your chapters and make sure there are no typos, because I noticed a few as I was reading through. Apart from that, you really do have a good concept going here, and I wish you all the luck in the world in finishing it! :)

Awesome, loved the update. Although you have a lot of errors, I recommended you fix 'em or else someone might report you. This isn't a threat, just some advice..
Update soon!

~Pansy Xo

love the update

Hehe, and so the main story begins ^___^
So happy.
Update soon!

~Pansy Xo

XD People on mibba fuckin' love sex scenes...
Ooh Frankie's preggo XD
I'm loving it, hope ya update soon!

~Pansy Xo

Hahaha no its just I want to be on the safe side. You know how some people can be.