Desert Life - Comments

Just to make a correction to the comment below, I don't wanna start an argument about it, but there are a bunch of Killjoy Frerards, just saying, but not many are original...
This story is original though :D
That's probably why I like it!
Well I really liked it, but you didn't really have to point out that the sex scene was over, XD Hope that didn't sound rude....
Update soon!

~Pansy Xo

Heres a comment for ya. Keep writing bc nobody really make Killjoy Frerards.

Aw thanks so much for mentioning me in the author's note! It mean a lot.
Of course you can make something of this idea! It's not crazy, it's awesome! You can always make something great if you believe in it! Ew. Now I sound like an annoying prep... Well whatever! I loved this chapter. I hope you update soon!
:)

~Pansy Xo

:D You updated!
I loved it, poor Frank. He should of took the pill, I mean sure it would of hurt anyways but its better than a shot....
Update soon!

~Pansy Xo

Haha you're welcome :)
Although, it would be fasted for me to respond, if you were to comment on my profile. (if you want. you don't have to.)
Because if I didn't have the strange urge to look at the comment again, I'd never see your message :D

Thanks! I hope to have the next chapter up soon.

Okay, I really really like this. It seems very interesting.
You only have a few errors which makes me happy, 'cause I hate stories with dozens of errors, but really you only have like, less than 5.

The only trouble I have with this is the '***' at the end of every paragraph. I expect to see a time lapse when I see those although I know its not representing a time lapse in this story, so I was sorta hoping that you could get rid of those, maybe? Just a suggestion, ya don't have to, if you do not want to.

Other than that I absolutely love this!
I hope that you update soon!

~Pansy Xo