Krovi. - Comments

Hey there I got your story through the comment swap, I read the first three chapters, I hope you don't mind me not reading the whole things.

Pros: I like the main character, as having just moved out of my house (with help from my parents) I can relate. I like the small details you give to characters like the tv reporters nervous tick, and the sensory details that are prevalent in every chapter I read.

Cons: I must admit I'm a little biased, vampires stories just aren't really my thing, so I didn't enjoy this story as much as I might. Two things that really bothered me though are A) It seems really unrealistic that she was out in the middle of know where and two guys just showed up randomly to rape her. B) I'm like 90% that no police force would let reporters film the bodies, they would contaminate the crime scene and are there for required to stay like 100 meters away, so even zooming in your wouldn't get that great of images.

I kinda get bogged down in details, but the bigger parts of your story are nice, good writing style, good summary, good suspense.

Update, update, update! -squeals in joy-
I missed this story so much xD

Thank goodness this is back! I was missing Oren ;] Can't wait to see what happens next!

Awww, Oren does love her<3 can't wait to see what happens next:)

Oh god....................you MUST MUST MUST Update. Please. I check almost everyday for an update. :(

Love the update ^-^

Sorry I haven't commented in a while! I've been busy myself, but I still love the story; you guys never cease to keep me hooked, and I always check everyday for if it's been updated!

Wow. Ok now i NEED to know what happens! you never fail on making a story interresting

cant wait on the next one :3

Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!! Keep up the good writing! (: Update soon please.

This is extremely intereating and I'm HOOKED!

I like the new bakcround:) how do you find all of this pictures??? they were made for this story!

Wonderful story. Can't wait for more.

i cant wait on the next one next one please :3

Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's so fantastic. (:

Oh, so the dog was Yelena, that makes sense, and i think it's sweet that Oren keep Belz all those years.

Ack!! I'm still so enamored with this story :) Can't wait for the next post!!

Product of comment swap but holy shit. I haven't really read a straight fic here since I've been engrossed in the slash world but damn you got me hooked. Obviously I subscribed. Can’t wait for more. :D

Product of comment swap but holy shit. I haven't really read a straight fic here since I've been engrossed in the slash world but damn you got me hooked. Obviously I subscribed. :D

"My little flightless bird"
That was sooo cute (:
Update soon, please, this book is so cool ahah